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A frequent pegasus who posts infrequent stories.

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Queen Chrysalis invades Canterlot again with new tactics. These methods, however, are a bit unorthodox.

Cover Art By: Skitterpone

(Do not continue reading if you do not approve of hypnosis, mental regression, or diaper lover themes. If you do not like it or are under legal age, please do not keep reading.)

Chapters (1)
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Comments ( 15 )

nice~ I wanna see a bonus chapter of Luna being converted :P

I remember seeing this picture on derpibooru, and thinking "Hey, this could make for a nice picture for a diapered fic."

And what do you know, a fic was made. Good job with this story, scribe. It looks like Cadence and Shining are in for some diapered fun. :raritywink:

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A thoroughly enjoyable read, would love to see a sequel.

I think it was great to see an other story with mind control AB/DL withing Shining and Cadence, but I feel that the taking over of the Crystal Empire and turning the ponies in Foals has all ready being explored by Raistlin Majere in The Foal of an Empire.

very funny but i would like more chapters :P
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The ending is such sequelbate, please tell me Celestia and Luna will be joining them soon.

Nice but again the story is extremely rushed. I would really love to see a much larger story from you that plays out at a slower pace.

as much as i see some potential in this.. i sadly don't like Doomed stories (Where the bad guy wins, end of story). This story could use more work on not only how everything was played out.. but also be a little bit more real.

If there ever is a sequel, I'd love for it to consist of the other alicorns turning the tables on Chrysalis, and making her into an adult baby

Uhh....how was there any romance in this? I still thought it was funny, but still there was not a single bit of romance in this the entire time.

throwing his concentration off and forcing him to look away from his intense scowl at the changeling queen.

I would think it would fill him with intense fear for Chrysalis. However not the fear for a monster but the fear a child has for his mother.

SEQUEL IS NEEDED! PLZ PLZ PLZ MAKE A SEQUEL

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