BPT: The "Second" Second Life of Midnight Blaze

He journeyed throughout the history of Equestria but was struck down before he could complete his journey.

Now he must undergo another way by going through another life!

Chapters (3)

Chapter 1: Rebirth · 9th Oct 2016 · 1,441 words
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Chapter 2: Family · 13th Oct 2016 · 3,587 words
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Chapter 3: First Day of School · 2nd Jul 2017 · 2,310 words
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Southern Wing

Southern Wing #1 · Oct 9th, 2016 · · · Chapter 1: Rebirth ·

Looking forward to where this goes.

SageBrony07

SageBrony07 #2 · Oct 9th, 2016 · · · Chapter 1: Rebirth ·

This may give us as readers more into Mid nights background.

Pen Dragon

Pen Dragon #3 · Oct 9th, 2016 · · · Chapter 1: Rebirth ·

Well it just so happens that I'm extremely good at writing first-person stories and I'm willing to help you out if you need it Wolven. And if you don't know who I am because of my name change. It's Shadowblade. Good job I look forward to reading more

Seeking Dusk

Seeking Dusk #4 · Oct 9th, 2016 · · · Chapter 1: Rebirth ·

Not going to lie, I've wondered about this chapter of his life for a while. Very pleased to see you writing it.

Pen Dragon

Pen Dragon #5 · Oct 10th, 2016 · · · Chapter 1: Rebirth ·

When will the second chapter be ready? I really want to read it

Southern Wing

Southern Wing #6 · Oct 13th, 2016 · · · Chapter 2: Family ·

Aww. widdle midnight is so cute.

SageBrony07

SageBrony07 #7 · Oct 13th, 2016 · · · Chapter 2: Family ·

I wonder how long till he gets more deja vu signals

Pen Dragon

Pen Dragon #8 · Oct 26th, 2016 · · · Chapter 2: Family ·

How long until the next chapter?

Wolven5

Wolven5 #9 · Oct 26th, 2016 · · · Chapter 2: Family ·

7672709 Things r really busy right now, so I can't tell u for certain

ShadowLight96

ShadowLight96 #10 · Jul 2nd, 2017 · · · Chapter 3: First Day of School ·

“WHAT IF I LOSE MY HALL PASS?!” I screamed, that Shining grabbed my shoulders.

Not entirely sure what the correction needs to be, but the part where shinning grabs his shoulders doesn't look right to me.

The way Momma spoke and sounded so sure, it made me feel less afraid and more excited! I looked away from her and towards the school. It was tall but felt welcoming, almost a like a big pony inviting us in for a hug. And all the other colts and fillies laughing and having fun, I started to want to go out there and have fun with them.

Unnecessary "a" there.

Momma smiled as he shook his hoof, “Faerie Tail, and this is my son, Midnight Blaze. He’s starting his first day of school, although things got a little mixed up and… I only found out yesterday that school began a few days ago, so I was looking for the school office to speak with the principal?”

You put "he" instead of "she" at the beginning of the quote.

Wolven5