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2+4
#2 and #5 (or #6 have the cmc hide somewhere safe and save rainbow)
2-5
2 and 3.
2/3
#2-#3 #saveRainbowDashlater
I chose this option to save the fillies, I don't care about that egotistical bitch.
Well, I say #2 and #5
2 and 5
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2-5 and I have an idea after dealing with the CMC have Twilight face a snake monster.
2 and 3
2 and 5
2+5
5
2+5
2+5
2+3
Try to treat the corruption at sugar cube corner
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Yeah...
Here's my chief "issue" with the story. Everything Twilight has done? It vastly exceeds most of the combat ability of Corruption of Champion's monsters by a significant margin. The bee fight should have just been her procedurally blasting them and being instant KO'd.
How accurate is this story with CoC lore? Because the bee race PURIFIES the corruption, not making it worse. They would not cooperate with the demons nor would they force their offspring into others. Sure they use aphrodisactic pollen to tempt others to fornicate for the sake of creating offsprings but they can be reasoned with and be told to stop. Given that their character trait is purification it really feels strange to have them corrupted, unless they are far different from their counterparts and they are only given that name since twilight don't know better?
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You are making a good point. I personally thought of them to be troops of the corrupted army. So, they are the bees. But were a bit corrupted and have some corruption in their veins. Of course this corruption would be flooded out of their systems if they would break apart from their master. At least that's the way I intended it to be. I'm trying to be accurate with CoC, but I of course also make mistakes, so I'm glad if you point things out for me. It can help to improve the story after all!
Anyway I hope you will continue to read and give me some feedback if you notice something out of place. Like I said, I'm doing my research, but I'm hardly one of the guys with the most CoC knowledge around.
Also as a side note, I'm adding a new chapter now!