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Hazel_Hester777


Hi! I'm Hazel and this little one with me is my buddy Hester. We're just a duo of misfits trying to find ways to fit in.

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This story is a sequel to One Can't Escape Their Own Past


It's happened. After such a long time of waiting, it's happened. A murder was committed on the Element Bearer of Kindness, by the Element Bearer of Generosity. Step into the story and read how it took place from the perspectives of four characters:
1. The victim herself
2. The love of her life
3. The victim's apprentice
4. The murderer

Rated Teen due to slight gore

Chapters (6)
Comments ( 17 )

Why so many dislikes?
This story is awesome.

No offense but Raritys reason for going homicidal towards Fluttershy and how she realized afterwards was a little poorly done.

I suggest a rewrite.

So what happened to Sweetie Belle?

9384090
i wonder what she thinks of her now murderer sister. it’ll take a long time before they can see eye to eye again.

why would Rarity allow lust to drive her to unhesitatingly murder Fluttershy? and why slowly?

9386037
You try liking somepony for a very long time, getting close to confess to them, only to find out they just confessed to your best friend. Then picture them dating, doing all the things you would've done, and dreading the prospect of marriage. Also, the pony can be quite a drama queen, in all honesty.

9392728
still shouldn’t encite murder considering their history together. the more humane thing to have done is drive a wedge between them by framing her for... i don’t know ruining Twilights favorite book or something.

9393040
It was Hester's idea. She always had a love for gore, and influenced me.
By the way, following up your earlier reply, what's lust?

9393773
you don’t know?

it’s one of the seven deadly sins, lust is the overwhelming need for sex and neediness and putting your sexuality above all else or in Rarity’s case she loved Twilight to the point it didn’t matter who got hurt.

9395593
....umm... You don't know?? Tell me how old are you before I answer that please.

9395791
I'm about 14, though Hester keeps telling everyone I'm 12. She always does this. Everytime that topic is brought up, she'd bring up an excuse not to let me know. Even in school! What is it?

9397255
umm... I think it’s ok to talk about it then.

it’s when you want to get really intimate with somebody else like beyond just kissing. it’s how babies are made. it’s something both sex’s love [not just men :ajbemused:] there’s a lot of ways to put it, to be honest perhaps talk about it with your parents.

9397543
Mom doesn't really tell me about these "facts of life" or something. I still don't get it. Why would Hester not let me know? Is it bad?

9398257
<.<.... :applejackunsure:... best let time tell ya. trust me it’s for the best.

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