Twilight Sparkle always preferred to work alone. She looked at group projects with disdain and co-presentations with disgust. They were excuses for others to shove off their workload on her.
But Twilight Sparkle was also smart. And smart people knew when they had to overcome their personal feelings for the greater good of the world. Which meant that she had to ask Sunset Shimmer - the girl who had yelled at her and made her cry yesterday after the Tri-Cross Relay - for help figuring out how to use her thice-damned Amulet, lest she lose control of it and the inadvertently make the entire world explode in a spectacular burst of lava.
Okay, maybe she was overreacting a bit. And Sunset probably wasn't that bad of a person. That said, she would still have to share her Noble Prizes and recognition.
But it didn't really matter, because she wouldn't be around Sunset Shimmer around for long anyway. Just a few experiments here and there. Give it a couple of weeks and their partnership would be over. Right?
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Sunset and SciTwi start out trying to figure out how the Amulet works and win a couple of Nobel Prizes, but they end up discovering a whole lot about themselves on the way there.
alternate tag added because a lot of freaky shit is gonna go down
It did feel rushed but... I don't think it's an issue... yet. Still. Tracked. But I would advise to put an Alternate tag since it takes place in the middle of Friendship Games(?).
Well that was interesting! I like the idea and the story is well written. Besides, I like Sunset as a scientist and even more I like SunsetSparkle. And that's pretty good for a first story! Can't wait to see more of it!
7632162 YUP SUNLIGHT IS BEST SHIP
but technically it isnt my first story, just my first fanfic
alt tag added
7631994 Yeah I just sorta wanted to get it done with and published yknow? The first chapter was actually kind of a prologue too I guess. I'll try to slow down just in case.
7632172 Yeah, but still; tracked and look forward to how it progresses. SunLight (Sci-Twi version) is my favorite ship.
7632166 Sci-Twi x Sunset is love, is life
7633703 Eeyup.
I.Need. MOOOOOAAAARRRRR.... Please...
Izzit really a good idea for Sunset to go riding off like that so soon after giving blood, on top of the possible concussion she got from getting whapped in the face with a door?
Shouldn't she like... lie down for a bit first?
Okay that was awesome! I can't say why, but I really like everything in this fanfic. Yes, maybe their relationship progress a liiiiiittle bit to fast, but that isn't such a big problem, so... Can't wait to see more! Yay!
After I've read Fractured Sunlight(Still my favorite SunLight) I've always wondered about this. I honestly think that they get the same blood type as their counterpart... otherwise it just feels wierd...
7634507 eheh, she probably would if not for the fact that twi's parents would be coming back in like... two minutes
7634581 well, we don't know if she ACTUALLY has horse blood-- but better safe than sorry during the blood drives i guess
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Haha thanks! More's coming soon!
Just a couple things --
First, good start! Looking forward to more.
Next, kind of a two-piece bit of medical knowledge in case it comes up in future chapters/stories. You don't disinfect the needle. You have a sterile hypodermic, and disinfect the area to be punctured. There's a reason you have to be trained in order to place needles, it's a little more involved than most people think, and you have to do a lot of things in the right order in order to minimize chance of infection and do it every time.
Also, unless Sunset has a fear of blood or needles, she wouldn't feel light-headed. If you donate blood you may become lightheaded because they take a full unit (500ml) of blood. If you're healthy, your blood pressure is regular, and you take a good long time to get up and walk out, you might not even be able to tell. An extremely thorough battery of tests will often require less than a tenth of that amount, a sample being anywhere from 2-10 ml of blood, so even if you're being tested for everything under the Sun, you'll probably lose less than 50ml to the needle.
Just a little info dump in case you need it. Again, looking forward to the next chapter!
Even if the immediately apparent technical flaws give me pause (your summary has more than one typo in it and using the words "I mean" in narration is never a good sign, especially as early as seen here), I love the premise you picked for this story. Yes, Twilight is supposed to be an intelligent person, and the way she let herself be dragged along by her prototype device throughout the movie did not scream "intelligence" - far from it, in fact. It's nice to see people pay attention to this and try to address the issue by writing a story that handles it better.
Though if you want your story to be the best it can be, you might want to get someone to help you proofread and edit it. Keep up the good work, and don't be discouraged!
That's not very accurate.
(BTW I know it's a joke. )
That's completely accurate!
Okaay, you asked for it. I think Sci Twi is a little too out of character.
Huh, now I want to read a story where the Elements of Harmony split Sunset's pyche. Either with the normal angel demon split; Sunset, Sunrise, and Sundown or just the evil twin split; Sunset and Sundown
7634581 ....Broken Sunlight? I just Googled, Fimfic searched, and searched through damn near 40 pages of your favorites library. Did you mean Fractured Sunlight?
7774577 *Facepalm* Yes, sorry. I'll correct that for future reference.
7774639 Darn I thought there was a good story I missed but I've already read it.
7775296 Oh... yeah, it's a real gem.
This is intriguing, do write more please I shall be watching!
Room for improvement, but a lot of potential here. I really hope you continue this.
HAHAHAHAAH HORSELANDIA, eso flipa 😂
Cutee, bastante bonita eh. Congrats!
Oww ésto está bastante bonito, por qué no continúas? 🥺🥺 Quiero maas jaja
Yes, Yes. Come to the MAD SCIENCE side