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Silver Malice


Creativity is always a leap of faith. You're faced with a blank page, blank easel, or an empty stage--Julia Cameron. Now let's see some PONIES!

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This story is based on the leaked season finale, don't read unless you want spoilers (also fits in with my Alpha's Love story line-- so I'll put in alternate universe just to be safe)

Defeat... once more, but this time far more devastating. What is a lost campaign next to a lost kingdom? The loss of a hive, the betrayal of her subjects, it's all too much for one queen to handle. How dare the ponies who should have been crippled defeat her, how dare her traitorous offspring usurp her throne, and how dare her subjects turn on her when she needed them most. But that's fine, she knows where to find other hives, other followers, she knows where to find the one changeling alpha who can not only gain her back her throne but make every pony and traitor suffer endlessly for their actions. She knows where to find Mandrake, her friend, her lover, her partner. Together they sired the new changeling order and empire. Together they will reclaim it. And in his fortress of Citadel Tor, she will fully come to grips with what has happened and what the future will hold. Even if the future is filled with blood.

Just put this spoiler warning for the cover, and after the finale premiers I'll remove it.

Cover art comes from here.

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Comments ( 17 )

A great story, good job mate :moustache:

7625277 Thanks, making me blush.

The finale is garbage and so is this fic.

7625526 I work with what i got, it's up to you to decide lol.

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>I work with what I got
garbage in, garbage out.

She looked back up at him, her green eyes staring into his ice blue. Why is it so many alpha males have blue eyes? she wondered.

Chrysalis all the changeling had blue eyes. the only one who didn't who had a greenish tint to his.

7626112 sorry it's meant to be normal eyes like hers or regular ponies, not the bug like eyes of the changeling drones. They literally have ice blue eyes similar to huskies. This is based off another series i am doing where i wrote that feature for "alpha's" and just forget to mention it here, I'll fix that.

Nice. The finale was rubbish, but this fic isn't bad. Go Chryssie go!

As for pointing out typos for this and the other fic, I'll do it once I'm at my pc, doing that on a phone would treasure ages.

7657520 I didn't mind the finale but i felt it was kind of rushed and a little too easy in the end, i do like how they kept Chrysalis from changing, and so she will be back but yeah, i felt like i had to give her a better ending then that, which will set up for my sequels to "An Alpha's Love.

7657903 It was very easy, and nonsensical. Love powered spell working I can see, since live gets converted into the spell. But pure love? It would've just made her stronger. And it surely paints a nice picture of changelings of they are clearly enjoying doing bad stuff and then all turn on their mother and ruler without a moment's hesitation for some food.

are you going to make a sequel to this ?

7716724 This one kind of stands alone since it was just my reaction to the season 6 finale, however, i tied it in with another story I'm working on, which will lead to a few other stories set in the same universe and timeline.

I might do a sequel to this chapter but i need to think up an idea for it, something that would expand a little more for the future stories etc.

is this cannon to your other story an aphas love?

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