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That was dark
Well done
7622679 Thank you
7622733 You're welcome
Are you going to do more like Celestia and Luna or the rest of the main 6?
Again with the uncalled for dislikes? Come on people! Give it a shot before you judge.
Regardless. Great story.
7622880 I have no plans to do so.
7623358 Thanks.
I kind of expected the downvotes. Anthro, dark, and clop make for a triple-whammy in that regard.
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That's too bad your good
Well that was something but in the end a great story also damn that is some dark shit man thats why its good also i will probably not stop thinking about it for a long time so yeah great story
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Thanks, both of you.
I've said this before (on other stories), but I really only write when I'm feeling inspired — when I have an idea stuck in my head that just can't stop thinking about. That's why I don't generally plan out stories ahead of time, and why I don't generally write sequels. My inspiration rarely strikes on the same idea twice, and I haven't really learnt how to control it yet.
7623787 Still, it's a bit disappointing considering one of our qualities is supposed to be Tolerate. Hehehe.
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The downvotes aren't from the conents of the material, they're from the lack of a story all together. What you have here is nothing more than setup. A first act without a second. A beginning without a middle or end.
If you didn't want to write out an entire story with this premise then you should set up some sort of prompt or "finish this" challange. There are a plethora of writers on this site that would have loved to complete a premise like this.
7624554 It's near impossible for either of us to know for certain where all the dislikes come from, but frankly I'd be astonished to discover an anthro-dark-sex-gore fic on this site without at least one downvote from a person who hasn't read it.
As for your criticism, thank you for your feedback, but no. This is the story I wanted to write, adding anything more would only detract from it, in my opinion. Sometimes what you leave out is more powerful than what you add in.
But hey, quality is subjective.
If someone wants to write a longer and more detailed story, based on this one, I would be both flattered, and happy for them to do so. I just wouldn't regard it as them "finishing the story for me", because as far as I'm concerned, this story is already complete.
7624311 Yes and no. It's OK to have a personal dislike for something, and to politely express that dislike. No-one has come here posting hate and insults. There's some ambiguity and disagreement on this site over exactly what the downvote feature should be used for, and how it should be interpreted, so I don't really mind if people do downvote one of my stories purely for subject/tags. It saddens me a little that we don't have a better search/filter/tag/rating system, but at the same time, I can't really fault the staff for that — it's not like I'm paying money for this site in the first place.
7625048 I know, I'm just being literal in the motto of the series.
7624226 you shouldnt be worrying about that because when you do it you come up with great stories p.s VAPENATIO
You know, I am sure your story is great, and I know things like Futa are likely your "thing" but it's not mine and for the life of me, I cannot even FIND any grimdark or sombra that doesn't stick a BIG horking D*#g on every female....
7633071 … well… thanks for sharing that, I guess.
7633071 it is in the description why'd you read it if you know you don't like this sort of thing?
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Well Hidemain:
I usually do not reply, as most people dismiss me as griping that I don't get what I want, but I feel your question is both valid and honest enough to be due a reply.
I am a writer myself and I read it because even with elements I don't like, the story has value. I liked the premise, the writing was good and inspiring. I admit my comment was, perhaps a plea. If you look at the stories posted here. People seem terrified of just using the CHARACTERS as is. a majority change them, either by making them anthro.... or adding anatomy. Especially Futa. it is, of course, everyone's right to write what THEY like....but I do like to give feedback of how much I enjoyed but wish it had...other elements... There was no intent to offend.
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I can respect that, and agree they need use characters as they are more often, though it does make it easier to write in some cases (depends on story). I myself prefer gender/ new anatomy (as you put it) changes when it's the center of the story and not an offhand "hey by the way she has dick too." That being said I am one of the weird fuckers that find it attractive(so long as it's another female involved) in stories and art but not in real life.
there's a sombra tag now
7904888 Thanks, but Sombra doesn't actually make an appearance in this story, so I think I'll leave the tag off.
You should add a chastity cage tag to this so that I can find it on google.
8519828 okay, thanks for the advice.
I love a happy ending. Twilight is way better this way!