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Moonlit Path


People are not born equal. That's the hard truth I learned at age four. But that was my first and last setback. -Midoriya Izuku

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The diary of Twilight Sparkle


I will start season 7 when I am caught up, to prevent confusion.

Chapters (25)
Comments ( 18 )

Well, it was Snips and Snails who caused it, not Trixie.

Comment posted by Moonlit Path deleted Oct 11th, 2016

7630215 But then again it was Spike that gave them the idea to do it, and at the end only Trixie had any type of Repercussions.

7632236 Thank you, i read it and i find myself agreeing with this version far more then the last one. :twilightsmile:

or just squish the darn thing under your hoof, that'll work

That's not a valid hypothesis. Where's the if statement?
Also, this whole fic seems rather unnecessary.

7635953 Is there a point to any of these stories, other than a form of entertainment? No, it's not necessary, but none of this is. Our lives don't depend on if we write a story or not.

If you don't like it, don't read it. I like it though, and I'm having fun writing it. I do want to thank you for giving it a chance and for your honest opinion though.

I feel like you could have done a little better on this one, compared to the others.

HOWEVER, I am enjoying these tiny little silly chapters.

7659179 Thank you, and yeah I got a little stuck on that one. I should hopefully have the next few up Saturday or Sunday.

younger sister to ac the way you want.

The "act" is missing a T.

Still don't know where she had been

I think you need something like "Still don't know where she was" here.

Hope this helps :pinkiehappy: .

can destroy and entire town

I believe you need "an" instead of "and."

Now I'm terrified to Spikes teenage years.

I think the word "of" would be better than "to."

Than the self explanatory friendship magic.

"Then the self-explanatory friendship magic," would be better.

Nice to see this get updated ^^

8131962 I'll hopefully have the rest of season 1 up tomorrow. I just need to find my flash drive that I wrote them on.

So what Twilight is saying here...is that some time in the future she gives up her name?

I’m still curious how exactly they make the colors

Well you see, the Pegasus failures go to this factory and a machine..... Snurk, hurk, bleh


Disregard this comment, the writer was off his medicines for too long. Don't worry, we'll fix that. Carry on.

8138254 It's just an expression. The "if I can't figure out something I'm good at, then I'm not me" kind of thing.

8138506 I was hoping someone would pick up on that :rainbowlaugh:

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