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Glen Gorewood


Hello and many salutations, I am a writer/ editor who has been stalking stories here for a few months now and finally gathered the courage to make an account. Cheers!

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A donkey adores his lawn, to an almost obsessive degree. On the day that the local lawn contest qualifiers are set to begin the unspeakable occurs. That glorious green lawn is damaged, with no time to repair it before judging. However impossible things are not always such, for the right price anything is possible.

How far will this obsessed lawn owner go for his green perfection? What price is he willing to pay for a miracle?

Sex Tag added for references in certain chapters but no actual acts.

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 4 )

Oh man, I like the work with the sounds you wrote.

I also totally like the tension rising and falling. I'd been guessing when and if anything was going to transpire.

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Thank you Belligerent my friend, in this case the sounds play a key role. You should in a sense, keep an ear on them as the story continues.

I am glad this chapter kept you guessing a bit on when or if things would happen. Things will be much clearer in the next chapter; which comes out tomorrow. I am so excited, this month is going to be so much fun. :pinkiecrazy:

Glen Gorewood

I'm really regretting not finishing this story earlier. I'm really intrigued by the whole left-handed trope in Celtic lore. Normally, I've always seeen it as something evil, but was that what you were going for here?

I really enjoyed the spiral Cranky went down , in a horrific way. This story is criminally underrated.

Also, there are some typos in the later chapters. Chapter 3 should have "intimate" instead of intimidate, for example.

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The left hand is a marked contract thing. The moment Cranky made the deal a mark showed on his left hoof. If the Puca hadn’t taken a liking to him, he would have ended up like the others. I chose the left hoof because the left hand isn’t evil it’s just often related to spiritual or mystical matters. However it’s often associated with bad or evil things, so I also wanted to have it set the mood of the story.

Send me a list and location of the typos if you want, I was really sick when I wrote this so I’m not surprised they are there. I can’t fix them till my iPad screen is repaired though. That might take a week or so. I’ll go through chapter three when I get my device back.

Glen Gorewood

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