I Love Saturday-nights...
Hanging out with your best pal on the sofa,while your drinking alcohol and watching Tv.
And the next time,you'll wake up in a barn...
Meeting an Cowgirl-pony,that is confusing as hell,have to do chores and work like a pig...
Is this a punishment...or is this an reward?
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Why so many red thumbs
!? Sure it had some minor flaws here and there 
, but it is no reason to dislike something someone worked hard on 
Here is a green thumb for your effort good sir
**Likes it based off the title and summery alone and leaves open tab for reading later** Oh! And also, SECOND!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
You did good fry
I wonder how it would be like if Bender ended up in Equestria.
833002 End of everything. Equestria would implode.
A Futurama cross over? You've got me.
*reads chapter*
And you've lost me. Sorry, it could have been done better. Keep trying though.
Free thubs up! I dont know why, sounds good. A lot of people can't get that right.
833157 I got more futurama Crossover's
Okay, here goes...
Concept:
Execution:
Writing:
'I' is always capitalised. You've got that mistake throughout the whole thing.
The abbreviation of 'come on' is not 'common'. At best you could get away with 'com'on'. Also, spaces after commas. Also, capital 'I'
I'm assuming you meant 'at the same time'. Also, spaces after commas and periods (another mistake that's throughout the whole piece).
Never write numbers less than ten as numerals except for times. Bacardi is a brand, so it should be capitalised. There's no apostrophe in 'Bacardis', and it should be 'put', not 'putted'.
Uhh...what? I don't even...
'Bacardi shouldn't be in quotes. 'trowed' should be 'threw', and the entire syntax of that sentence is off. How does one throw 'a' (not 'an') satisfied smile behind the couch?
Period after 'master' should be a comma.
Not even through the first paragraph yet, but I'll be here all day if I try to correct everything. You need to work on your spelling, punctuation and grammar. Now as to the actual story...
Aside from the spelling and grammar errors, you really couldn't think of a more appropriate metaphor? (Also, it wouldn't be the CIA trying to get someone out of the White House, let alone a thief)
Um, why is he jumping on a pile of pitchforks? I know Fry's an idiot, but I mean, 'common'. And where was Applebloom hiding? In the pitchforks? How did she smack him in mid-air?
Who sorts apples by length? Size, maybe...
How's he talking clearly with a bunch of pitchforks in his mouth?
Um, what? Since when has Applejack done anything like this? This is horribly OOC.
I'm assuming this is Fry being stupid and not just horrible mathematics, but putting it here just in case...
See OOC comment above.
1570089 Your comment is very honest and I respect that,my friend.
Also,this story and like all the other stories from this started out as a joke,I never knew it got a little bit too big,so I really didn't care about the grammar,the lines,the fact that I am lazy in some sentences. Anyway,thanks for your reply