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SuperPinkBrony12


I'm a brony and a Pinkie Pie fan but I like all of the mane six, as well as Spike. I hope to provide some entertaining and interesting fanfics for the Brony community.

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(Warning!: This fic has been rated Teen as a precaution, as it will contain diapers and diaper useage. Please read with discretion, or click elsewhere if it's outside your comfort zone. Thank you.)

Scootaloo loves her mother, she really does. She just wishes her mom would stop treating her like a baby all the time, especially now that she has her cutie mark.

Then, one day, Scootaloo accidentally brings home the wrong saddlebag from Twilight Time. And when Dizzy Twister goes to return it, a mishap ensues and the potion inside turns her into a foal. Luckily, Scootaloo soon finds out.

But now Scootaloo must care for her foalified mother, until a cure can be found. And even though she has the help of her friend, Diamond Tiara, Scootaloo is about to discover just how much responsibility comes with taking care of a baby.

Will Scootaloo and Diamond Tiara be able to keep the foalish Dizzy Twister under control? And will Scootaloo be able to find a cure before her father comes home?

(Dedicated to Matt11. Proofread and editied by deadpansnarker.)

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Comments ( 10 )

This really needs the comedy tag on it. Other than that this was really good and I fully enjoyed reading it. :twilightsmile:

7658750 I wasn't sure if the Comedy tag was warranted as the overall intent wasn't to be funny. There are some parts that are funny, but the overall focus isn't on Comedy.

7658760 Well I found this very funny and loved every bit of it. Tell me are you going to do a sequel to this?

7658780 Probably not. I mean, what could I possibly do for a sequel besides the obvious of Scootaloo having to explain to her mother what really happened?

7658783 Ok well there is that option but you could also have this happen to some one else and have Scoots be the one the take care of it with diamond trying to stay out of it only to get brought into it

7658799 Eh, that would feel repetitive, even if it were to be done with somepony like say Spoiled Rich. A sequel shouldn't just be the same thing but with a different character, it should feel unique.

It was good. I want one were Dizzy Twister has to take care of a regressed Scootaloo and is more harder to take care of then what Dizzy was, maybe even Starlight could help out until a cure gets made?

Scoots you owe Diamond BIG!

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