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Glen Gorewood


Hello and many salutations, I am a writer/ editor who has been stalking stories here for a few months now and finally gathered the courage to make an account. Cheers!

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In all her years as an author A.K Yearling has had one foe, whom neither she nor her alter ego Daring Do could defeat. It's vile plans so unpredictable and powerful she could only nudge it hoping it would give in. But it never has, for it's infinite skills and powers hobble the great author and explorer at each turn. It's cunning eyes watching her every move planning the perfect time and place to strike. It's great paws of eternal power waiting for the signs, for when she is at it's most vulnerable it's plan shall commence once more.

So says, The Fluffy Terror!

Any author or writer with a pet will know whom I speak of, for they alone are the fiends we can never conquer. And yes everyone's favorite author mare and explorer has one too, so fluffy and evil it is to do the dastardly things it does.

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Hahaha! This was funny!

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Thank you, I'm happy it amused you.
There will be a sequel in the future.:pinkiehappy:

Glen Gorewood

You aren't using the pink fluffly pony?

Why not?

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*Rolls over, yawns, and opens an eye*
Because the fluffly pink pony is in the other story concerning a feline. It will be released in a few days.
I hope you enjoyed this one in the meantime, I must go back to bed.

Glen Gorewood

The story is a little short. Needs some more depth and editing too.

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It could have worked with Flufflupuff due to the times in the blog she acts like a caf but whatever.

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Yes but sadly it wouldn't have worked with this particular story. After all if Flufflepuff were at A.K Yearling's; the story would of had to end with Chrysalis breaking in to take it/her back. Which is part of a plot of a completely different story for the future, but not this one.:twilightsmile:

Glen Gorewood

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Thank you for the critique, I'll go back and edit it later this evening.
It is short, however the sequel will go more in depth concerning the feline fiend, and the relationship with Daring Do/A.K Yearling.
Eventually I hope to create a series of stories around this one, including a prequel.

Glen Gorewood

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Thank you for the critique, I'll change the cover art in a bit since it gives things away it shouldn't. I'm sticking with the style, but the spoiler will go the way of that type writer.

I'll also make the edits you suggested as well, and explain the anti burglary gear. I knew I forgot something. :twilightsheepish:

*face palms* Not again, it's always those basic words that get me. You know the "to, too, and two," and "there, their," words are my lifelong enemies? Because they are. Like Steven King and the words "the, and, what", but hopefully practice will remedy this word problem of mine. And others helping me to spot my grammatical mistakes.

Thank you for the helpful critique Green Plant Icon, I hope my future tales amuse you and others.
I'll try to make them smoother than this one in writing form, and as original in concept as I can. :twilightsmile:
Especially the sequels.

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Unless the plot twist was that the fluffly pink pony really is the writer cat, since we could see a flashback of her adopting her at an animal shelter. That would kind of make A.K Yearling Flufflepuff mother. Only that since Flufflepuff always acts as a cat around her she just thinks that is a weird cat. And Fluff wanted to invite her mother to the wedding but keep getting distracted cause well, she is used to act like a cat with her mother.

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That's a good idea, I really like it, but I never said who exactly owns Fluffle puff...
Whoever said the plot twist in the series was Flufflepuff was currently A.K Rowling's pet?
There are plenty of others who would fit the mold of owning the fluffy, furry, poofy, pony that acts like cat far better.

Glen Gorewood

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The plot twist is that since she cared about her when Fluff was little, even if she thought it was just a weird cat, Fluff sees A.K Yearling as her mother.

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Again that's a good plot twist for a story, but it isn't this one.
I've got a different direction in mind for where FlufflePuff shows up, and with whom.
But if you turn this idea of yours into a story, I'll surely read it.:twilightsmile:

Glen Gorewood

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Don't temp me, I already have way too many unfinished stories.

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That I understand, well if I have time around December I'll see if I can't make this idea of yours a one shot tale.
Of course you'll be credit for the idea. :twilightsmile:

Glen Gorewood

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