Ponies and Mons

by ezio dementay

pinkies funny buddy!

The world around Pinkie was made of sweets and candy, chocolate rivers surrounded every Pinkie white chocolate sharks from all corners of the river, fangs made of caramel ice cream ready to eat Pinkie alive!

Pinkie got out a knife and fork, placing a bib around her neck and jumping at the sharks, making the sharks wet themselves in fear at seeing a candy obsessed, starving, and probably insane and possibly lost her mind Pinkie pie!

“Please Pinkie, mercy on our deliciousness!” Pinkie dived in the water and started cutting and ripping the white chocolate sharks in two, devouring their chocolate insides.

“Yummy!” Pinkie ate all the sharks, leaving no remains of the sharks left, making Pinkie laugh evilly at her lunch, before falling out bed, waking up from her “peaceful” sleep, being awoken by the noise of cupcakes being eaten by something weirdly... creepy.

She headed to the kitchen, a cupcake at the ready in case of a robber, looked around the said kitchen, but found nothing, only plates, icing, floating cupcakes, frosting, cakes, more floating cupcakes and... Pinkie thought that flying cupcakes were not here. she gave the last batch to Colegate!

Pinkie grabbed the cupcake, but the cupcake kept floating, dragging Pinkie across the ground.
“Hey, come back here cupcake!” Pinkie ate the cupcake, but she felt something in her mouth, spitting out a little rag.

“How did that get there?” the rag started to move, and grew a little blob, and some eye’s along with its head, though it looked dizzy and confused as to being eaten by a pink pony with candy floss hair.

Pinkie gasped at the weird floating rag with a little horn on top and ran up to it, and gave it the traditional pinkie pie welcome, minus the party cannon of course.

“Hi i’m Pinkie pie!” somehow, against logic itself, Pinkie plucked a big, delicious, strawberry and chocolate cake, with triple strawberry and quadruple chocolate filling, and offered it to the floating rag, who was even more confused now then ever, but no pony or flying rag or dragon ever resists a Pinkie pie welcome cake!

The rag said “Shuppet” and cut a little piece with her horn and examined it for a while, sniffing it, even though it lacked a nose or any way to smell the cake, but ate a little bit of the cake and smiled happily at the taste but almost passed out from sugar overload and strawberry explosions taste in her mouth.

“Aww Shuppet... that’s a funny name.. how about... ghosty! no wait! floaty buddy!” Pinkie kept thinking of more and more names for Shuppet, with shuppet merely rolling her eyes a bit and eating more cake as well, smiling happily.

“Hey i know!” Pinkie grabbed Shuppet and went to a room labeled “cake room, keep out”, and as expected, the room was massive in size, filled with cakes for pony’s, griffons, and even dragons for some reason or another.

Pinkie grabbed a bunch of birthday cakes and ate about ten cupcakes in about twenty seconds flat, and smiled at shuppet.

“Okay misses floaty, use your fire wisp move thingy to make the candles on the cakes light up! I know you have that move, ghosts sometimes have that funny move!” Shuppet was surprised but in any case, used the move Pinkie asked of her, creating little balls of fair, lighting all the candles on the cakes in only a few minutes flat.

“Yay! good misses floaty!” Pinkie grabbed shuppet again and went to the babycakes room, hopefully, Shuppet will not scare them.

Pinkie jumped in the room happily, making the baby’s laugh in delight at Pinkie, though quickly turned to Shuppet out of curiosity, and laughed at how funny Shuppet looked, but Shuppet didn’t mind and stuck her tongue out at the baby’s making them stick their tongues out as well in response.

“Little baby cakes, this is Shuppet, and she’s your new best buddy!” The baby’s cheered in joy and hugged Shuppet tightly, who was surprised at how nice pinkie was being to her.

“Shuppet?” she said with a confused look at Pinkie. Pinkie bounced over to Shuppet and petted her on the head, making Shuppet smile happily, but felt drowsy for some reason, probably the piece of cake and the overload of sugar was wearing off on her, and started to float to the floor asleep.

“Aww! so cute!” Pinkie picked up Shuppet and placed her on her head. “You can sleep on my hair you little ghosty thing you!” Pinkie hopped off to the kitchen and started making some cupcakes, with shuppet sleeping on Pinkies head happily.

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I hope everyone enjoyed this chapter, everyone requested Shuppet, and i can see why, so i hope you enjoyed her appearance.

Comments

[ezio dementay]

1010235 hmm..the baby cakes could cry, witch would supple some food.
1010235 also... poffins can be given to shuppets as food, along with berrys

[Thorn_the_Just]

!!!YAY!!!

You took my recommended

[ezio dementay]

1011295 of course i did!
now give me a hug!

[martyrex]

When come Pokémon batte's

[ezio dementay]

1011537 don't worry, just be patient!

[martyrex]

I have an briljant idea scooterloo with an torchic

[ezio dementay]

1011646 BUCKING GENIUS!!!
LET ME HUG YOU!!!!

[martyrex]

I have an other idea princess luna with an lunatone

[ezio dementay]

1015544 ha! i knew someone would say that pair.. but go on?
hay if you want, you and i can write the lunatone and luna chapters.. you just have to give me a basic idea for chapters and such.

[martyrex]

i'm very bad at writing fics i tried once and that one wasn't good

[ezio dementay]

1015740 ahh bro, you don't have to write it, just give me a basic idea for the chapters and such.

[martyrex]

this is how i had it in my head: scooterloo wakes up in the cutie mark crusader club house after a night sleeping in it and she right in front of her a strange chicken like creature (torchic) and becomes friends with it: and that is how far i have it yet

p.s have you read the story called hoennshy because it's a very good fanfic

[ezio dementay]

1016133 aww... sounds really cute!

[martyrex]

thank you?

[ezio dementay]

1016147 your welcome, now give me hug!

[Magnum the Critic]

................this Chapter is awarded with...........

INFINITE
There are grammar errors all over the place. such as: Pinkie laugh evilly at her lunch, before falling out (OF HER) bed

And really: Pinkie ate all the sharks, leaving no remains of the sharks left, REALLY BRO? That sentence was so bland and lacking of any description that it just soured th rest of the chapter for me. I expected beter than this. the earlier chapters were so much better.

I think you should get a proofreader.

[ezio dementay]

1016230 i know.. sorry..
problem is, my editor is away, and often very busy, so i need to find a new one..

[Thorn_the_Just]

Scoots should get an electric or rock (or bug)
Sweetie should get a psychic or water

I don't know why...

[ezio dementay]

1052250 actually, i'm writing for scoots at the moment, so you shall see.

[Thorn_the_Just]

1052311
CAN'T WAIT!!!

You are the only person to reply to my comments...

[Thorn_the_Just]

1015740
It can't be worse then mine...

I iz worcedezt

[PinkAndYellow1025]

Shuppet:
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