Ponies and Mons

by ezio dementay

what ideas for villans you got?

Okay time for a little vote on something for the villain of this story, or at least for a little while then I’ll make another villain, and then so on and so forth.

The villain for the story will be based off team aqua, and now here are some things I want to go over, and there will be some options:

One, he could go to Ponyville, and find pipsqueak and well, they could be brothers, and he would take pipsqueak with him on adventures to places that would scare the crud out of him, like a good big brother should.

Now to be honest, this is rather funny in my books, but, I can see if someone would think this is stupid.

The other option is you make it up. Whoever makes the best back story for him, I will gladly use in the story.

Mind you, I just want this villain to be partly likeable, not a completely evil villain, just a villain with some likeable perks to him.
Anyway, give me your ideas everyone.

Comments

[ezio dementay]

1713399 you know, i have that reaction to most halo storys.
anyway, sorry about the capitals, due to tech reasons, i can't really ask my editor for help right now
plus, he is busy with his own story.

[Stoneificaunt]

His brother should be like Jack Sparrow.

[ezio dementay]

1713444 hang on let me get my jack sparrow chrateistics sheet...
lets see:
ladys man, sharp shot, drunk, talks like umm... zero from borderlands but with some problems, rather smart, has a hat..
these sound good?
also, what about him being pips big brother?

[Stoneificaunt]

Well I can just picture him being like metaphorical brother or something like a first mate.

[ezio dementay]

1713498 huh okay then
now for a name... jack aquario? sparrow drop? hydro squeak?

[Stoneificaunt]

1713507 I like jack aquario.

[ezio dementay]

1713527 yay! and why is it i always have converations with my readers?
is that normal with writers?

[Festive Sombrero]

Barbosa is an acceptable character too.
cause he has a real peg leg. deal with it

[ezio dementay]

1718182 ai he does ladie, barbosa is cool
jack is more drunk the a japenese anime maker, but that makes him more likeable.

[Thunderbird]

1718250 Make him a surfer dude who's trying way too hard to convince everyone that, no really, things like Gyrados and Tentacruel aren't dangerous, they're misunderstood.

[ezio dementay]

1728984 so a surfer pirate jack sparrow big brother to pipsqueak oc villan stallion?
crud, thats a lot to add!
and if someone adds one more thing... i swear
as for pokemon, i have not thought of that yet.
i was thinking a sharpedo or something

[Soundy The Robot]

1713461 needs more jack