• Member Since 23rd Sep, 2016
  • offline last seen Nov 16th, 2016

MsMysticalMagic


Hi m8! I do some stories! Don't except a lot of them! I'll probably stick to 1 story for a while.

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Join The Crystal Gem's on an Adventure in Equestria, Where they will meet different kinds of
ponies, travel to different kinds of places and do different kinds of things!
They will even start fighting against evil forces!

Hopefully all of you will enjoy! I really enjoy writing this :)

Please tell me if You don't like what I'm writing! I gladly take constructive criticism.

Chapters (6)
Comments ( 24 )

Will lapis lazuli be in this?

7597294 :yay: Lapis is favorite character from su

7597303 Thank you so much! I followed you as well! Hope you like the story!

im not sure if this is a reference plus I'm trash.
So filled with determination eyyyy

''THAT is Garnet & Amethyst, that's called a wonderful thing called Fusion]'' Pearl explains. ''Interesting! It can definitely help on the Battlefield!'' Celestia grins.  

yeah, you might want to fix that up there, pal. But other than that, keep up the good work :twilightsmile:

7663571 Thanks for the criticism! Still getting use to writing stories.

This is a fun story. I like It. But it is.a.little fast paced. You might want to space it out a little, IDK I'm not an expert.

Good luck, hope everything that's happening for you turns out ok.

Because,
" we're going to do it together and it's gonna be great!"
(obviously not really but, I thought that was relevant) ? I'm bad at words.

Please tell me Jasper appears in this story.

7662127 THEY CAPITLIZED IT SO IT COUNTS AS A REF

(STARTS SPRAYING SHIP-B-GONE ALL OVER)
BE GONE

8006776
BEGOOOOOOOOOONEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:flutterrage:

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