You posted this seven seconds ago so I'm gonna be your first comment. Hope it's good!

Hope it's good too!

So I take it our protagonist just got screwed over. Let's see how he gets himself out of this mess.

One tiny nitpick:

...terrible curse that prays upon the good citizens.

Apparently this curse is deeply religious and requires ponies as a component of it's religious rites.

(prays = prayer, preys = hunting)

Now to read what will surly be an entertaining tale, now that my internal grammar gremlin has sated his appetite and laid down for what will hopefully be a very long nap.

edit: Yep, very entertaining. Can't wait for more.

Hopefully the character picks the right skill set and becomes a dex build. Everyone knows that dex builds are the best.

Now it's time to drop in to the first boss fight without any actual preparation.

Happy now?

Dammit Senpai... I don't even play any of From Software's games and you've already hooked me...

As I'm replaying Bloodborne trying to avoid spoilers, I find this in my new story feed.

GG.

Feckin character creation! Probably the best rendering I've read. Didnt even think of something like that. Good on you blackie

Well done on making the character creation feel genuine. On to the next chapter, where the little ones will bust a move to save your ass.

Awesome beginning, I hope its a good story.

Oh hell ya, I'm ready for this ride !!!