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Very nice chapter. Still, I found a pair of really minor things you may want to edit.
I suggest changing that to "possibility".
And there's a double space between these two words.
Wow. She was very....blunt.
Aw, not Apple Pie? The joke's right there! Very good otherwise.
great story, I loved it.
7614013 Yes, and it's one I've used in another story. Here's the thing though: when I was looking up types of apples for possible names, I discovered that there are two that are called opal. So, not only is it an apple -- and thus, fits with the Macintosh's family naming methods -- as well as a type of gemstone -- which would appeal to Maud -- but also sounds very similar to "apple."
7614544 Ah. Point retracted. Still a very good story.
Guess that means Limestone is barren.
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Well, when it comes to matters like this, you don't necessarily NEED to be anything other than blunt. This is less like a discussion of a relationship and more like discussing a business deal that will end in a kind of indirect relationship.
7615045 true but i'm still surprised.
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Justlikeafieldofrockssorrynotsorry
God fucking damnit I can't help but hear Ben Stein in my head whenever Maud speaks. It's like if Ben Stein was a phone sex operator. Of all things in the world I didn't need to hear Ben Stein's voice in my head saying "fuck me senseless".
This filly is going to have to be sent to Tartarus eventually as a top-tier threat to Equestria. She's going to be so strong that just prancing a bit's going to wreck half a town.
A sweet (though also really weird) story about two of my favorite ponies.
7615740 Or she might be the greatest hero Equestria has ever seen, able to defeat even the likes of Tirek with one buck.
I liked the non clop best, thanks for labeling it, I would love to see a sequel showing the dynamic between Mac, Maud, and little Opal.
aww a perfect story.
Hmm, titan of a stallion and amazon of a mare for parents. That is going to be one OP filly.
7615843 I can see it now: One Buck Mare.
This was a very good short story.
Um, aren't these two cousins? Oh well no big deal.
I was hoping we'd get to see Maud giving birth. Can you imagine it, in her usual monotone. "This is the most painful thing I've ever experienced".
7616939 Dubious extended family cousins.
Dubious as in not guaranteed to even be related.
Extended family as in their many greats ancestors were distant relatives.
The whole take away from the episode that explored it was that it didn't matter if they were related by blood they were close enough friends to be family.
I am very okay with more MaudMac. Though to be honest, half of me was hoping that when he was called to see the foal, he would be asked to help out with Marble too
If I could make one criticism, though...it could be just my personal preference, but I thought Maud's voice came off...too blasé? I know that sounds bizarre considering who we're talking about here, but in my personal opinion, there's a trap many people can fall into when writing her voice where they think, "well, she speaks with a mostly monotone voice, so let's give her a lot of long sentences with big words for her to drawl robotically through." I'm not saying it's bad, but it doesn't feel right for her to me. I see her as keeping her sentences simple and to the point without being too verbose. Kind of like Big Mac, actually. But again, that very well may just be personal preference.
The idea of her saying "fuck me senseless" tickles me in a way I didn't know I needed tickling though
Nice story!
The mare's tongue the slipped out, tracing over the sensitive flesh and teasing the contents inside
Also horses don't have a hymen.
7618071 For the first, the typo has been corrected.
As for the second, google and Sir Barton disagree.
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BWAHAHAHAHA! That sounds like the funniest porn parody anyone could ever make.
7614882 what? Why? I honestly curious.
Also how dare you say such things about my pony wifu
7618845 While I can't actually answer, my guess would be that it has to do with Limestone being in charge of the rock farm and supposedly the oldest. As such, it be her responsibility to conceive a new generation of Pies.
7614882 Maud's decision and her actions have no reflection on her families own choices in regards to family. She had merely felt that it was time for her to do such, and has no interest in romantic relationships. It is in no way affected by any fertility capabilities or lack thereof of her siblings.
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One Buck Mare!!!
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Like a rock.
Fantastically in character.
As if it wasn't awkward enough already.
Am I the only one imaging that even during all this she still as her bland monotone expression and voice
7618071 seriously horses also don't wear dresses or talk. Or do like 90% of what we accept as cannon in the show. For example daffodils are toxic to horses, but twilight enjoys them on her sandwiches. It's called imagination. Anyway Good story I enjoyed it I think marble should be hitting Mac up next.
I'm hoping they get it all down in writing.
The sex has been concluded.
You did a good.
Gold star.
7616335 Pony Atlas anyone?
I'll be honest, I would rather have seen something like this happen with Marble Pie rather than Maud Pie. However, I bet Marble would actually marry Big Mac so it wouldn't exactly work out like this entire story. Overall, I really liked it and thought it was a sweet.
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It’s not fair that no one noticed this brilliant pun for four years.