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I write poni. I am easily distracted. I like Oreos. I do commissions!

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Good fic :twilightsmile:

Delightfully hot.

~Skeeter The Lurker

I'm amazed this took so long.

I like how you dealt with consent in this one.

Given how many mind-control fans are on this site, (myself included) I'm surprised there aren't more of these already.

This begs sequel. Start of a three way relationship maybe?

and a bowl of sugar

No kidding. Both literal and figurative.
This is adorable.

I was wondering how long it would take for a story like this to get published.

Mm sexy Rarity :)

now i'm still waiting for a story were Sunset grabs someone who has a crush on her and clop ensuses

...a bowl of sugar.

Yay!

Yum. I like it a lot!

Considering last weeks episode, I was starting to wonder when I was going to see these kinds of fics pop up. :rainbowlaugh:

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Hello! Good story, huh?

~Skeeter The Lurker

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I enjoyed it, for some reason. :raritywink:

Can you do one with A.J. and F.S. ?

or Pinkie Pie ?

edit: have one with A.J. and pinkie Pie under F.S.'s power.

FINALLY, I was wondering when all the damn Mind Control fics were going to come out of this episode.

You had me at "and a bowl of sugar."

Man I forget I left this gathering dust in one of my tabs. Though I'm keen about clop I'm glad to see your idea found success. Good job, Twinkie! :trollestia::moustache:

There can never be enough good, consensual mind control fics like this one. Bravo! :twilightsmile:

While I don't ship RariDash (nor any lesbian Dash pairing), and while I would like to see RD be the pony (or one of the ponies) in control for once, this still hit my hypnosis fetish in just the right way.

Comment posted by Lurid Beam deleted Oct 8th, 2017
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