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"Ala is a horse philanderer." —Senator fourths

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'You' are Rainbow Dash.

You and the girls are all in stasis, headed to Cepheus Prime for some routine diplomatic talks.

...So why did everything just go dark?

Written for Zaponator's "Aliens!" Fic Contest Thingy of Great Justice.
Thanks to Fourths for pre-reading.

Chapters (23)
Comments ( 16 )

Okay, sci Fi horror has me. 2nd person is an abomination, but... Well. We'll see!

I thirst for a sequel.

Interesting.
Quite possibly the only way second person could work at all well. It's still an abomination, though.

Pfffft, holy hell you went overboard.

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2nd-person is just misunderstood. :fluttercry:

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There might be other stuff in this 'verse at some point.

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I just don't know what went wrong... :derpytongue2:

Aight, haven't read it yet. Wish me luck. Hopefully I'll be able to keep my socks on for the ride.

Oh no, a face hugger!

Holy crapcakes, Antimatter...it's a small miracle that anything here is still intact. :pinkiecrazy: You can get through it RD! :rainbowdetermined2:

Informative! And painfully dated! The best kind of safety film! :raritywink:

Time to flee, time to fight!
Fly for your life RD! :rainbowhuh:

Whoa. Frozen aging, perhaps restored youth? Whatever the case, it makes tying down any kind of roots a tricky and painful prospect...so no wonder the girls are all out there. Wonder how long ago this conversation happened, and their ages...an interesting thought.

I would like if there were more to dis'. Is a goodin', and I'd like to know more about Rainbow and Rares. So saucy to imagine them together, even if they have to deal with -brutish- creatures. :duck:

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Glad you enjoyed it. There's certainly enough backstory and worldbuilding in my head to do other things in this universe—the problem is finding the time and will to write more. :raritydespair:

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Ah! So prompt a response. I do hope that some inspiration comes to you, with some amount of time to see it be made real. Otherwise I'll just have to remark how much I liked the story. Which, I believe I did already, but I'll say again that it was most enjoyable reading up how this cocky pegasus fared in this case. :pinkiehappy:

XK-class automatics

That's some hefty automatics, eh?

Why does this remind me of SCP, now?
Yes, yes, I know, XK-class scenarios.

It's an egg! Quick, go poke it! Cause that's obviously the best idea. :pinkiecrazy:

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