Book 1: The Marble Run
Twilight accidentally came into contact with an ancient alien artifact, buried deep under the hills of Canterlot. In a rush to preserve the vast knowledge within, she did the unthinkable, and her boldness rewarded her with knowledge of the past and visions of the future, though at the cost of something even more intangible.
She decided to use this incredible discovery to chart her own destiny. But would life become simple and easy just because of this?
Cover art by: myself
This is my longest 'Ur-story' with more than 500k words in store, and this is chronologically the first MLP fanfic that I wrote. Some of the plot-points in other stories of mine might be contained within, and probably in fact originated from it.
Chapters (25)
Erm just saying everfalls from dragons dogma
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The similarity is well noted. Still, Evenfall is, well, another name for 'twilight'. The fall of the evening, so to speak.
hello, this well the first twi friend's idea,
one lines of very promising different time,
but a favor doesn't saturate you of histories that you can press yourself in following them, alone that and I expect the upgrade of 3 o'clock that I continue that I have left in wait, of but
hola , esta bien la idea del primer amigo de twi ,
una linea de tiempo diferente muy prometedora ,
pero un favor no te satures de historias que te puedes presionar en seguirlas , solo eso y espero las actualizacion de las 3 que sigo , que me queda en espera , de mas
ho my!!! 3 cap of a shot!!!
good to read
7588427 Don't worry, this is pretty much the end of my story splurge. (Well, maybe one crazy crossover left)
These stories are all that I had at hand originally, and I'm not so bold that I keep digging new holes for myself to jump in. I'll try to update the trio of 'Spike-ification' stories as frequently as possible as well, so as to not keep you waiting! But as I told another reader in another thread, I only have materials left for Shrinking Lavender and this one. The others either need heavy revision or await new workable ideas to proceed. I'll try writing them up, but they might be updated slower than the two that I mentioned. Anyway, thanks a million for your keen interest!
(Sorry, my Spanish is only good for very simple conversation.
I get what you mean though!)
i had planned on tracking this so i could see when new chapters came up, but the whole thing was finished in one day, even the sequel too
i'm now tracking the sequel of the sequel, somehow i have a feeling that is gonna be finished just as quick
7593357 Haha, nah, I just dropped all of my manuscripts on my hands at once! It's unusual, I know, because authors here like to release bit by bit (to give the readers digestable bite-size chunks on a reasonable schedule and hmm... to keep their stories in 'Latest Update'? Haha)
This story has been worked on since August last year, that's why there are already 450k of words. I decided to publish them all at once. There are many reasons, one of them is that I'm too impatient to release that long of a story in small chunks
. Also, I love writing this story a bit too much, so I sort of want to put them out there to lift the nagging worry and expectation off my chest 
The sequel of the sequel (Actually, kind of a continuation, but the length kinda forced me to separate the story in three arcs) is still being worked on, so something like 100k of words being dropped in a day would not happen again!
P.S. Thumbs up for Nanoha!
Oh wow. This was a great read and an amazing concept.
That said however by the gods you need an editor!!! There are chapters with entire sections missing and sentence format shifts randomly all the time.
The right editor could turn your great story into an amazing one.
7642149 Cheers mate, thanks a lot
Ah... This story is relatively unpolished because it's grown quite long and it's undergone multiple plot revisions. Moreover, it's actually the very first story that I wrote (I still remember I was quite literally writing and giggling with a newbie's passion, but little of my usual proofreading rigor). I've put it up here anyway because I was writing and uploading other shorter, more carefully proofread stories. I am determined to do a big proofreading marathon after I finish every arc... but since it's still hundreds of thousands of words away, I fear that it would be somewhen between now and the heat death of the universe
Now I'm imagining Applejack and the cows just standing there and mooing at each other.
EXCUSE ME YOU MAY NOT HAVE THOUGHT THE FULL IMPLICATIONS OF THIS THROUGH.
Impossible! Trixie would have easily defeated the Diamond Dogs! Her whining is way more annoying than Rarity's
Stetson. Technically it's the "Carlsbad" but people only remember the company's brand name, since they control almost all the hat market.
Please?
The future sight stops cold at Starlight's meddling with the past. Starlight was a severely depressed, unstable, broken mare when she did this. She kept disrupting the Rainboom, but in the past they know, the Rainboom happened with no Starlight to be seen. And yet their timeline is still deviating from its original course, since her village doesn't exist. Her trail has gone cold, vanished without a trace before she could found the village, vanished at a time before she had hurt anypony. Starlight would know the exact moment in the past that she was most vulnerable, and alone. She didn't change history by stopping the Rainboom.
She changed history by stopping herself from existing.
Now that's how to kill off a character.
Very impressive. I dunno how you made it work so well.
7769233 W- W- W- Whoa, my heart leapt out of my mouth when I saw my notification explode! Anyway, thanks for the interest and meticulous proofreading! I'll go about fixing those mistakes.
7768796 *Shhhh* H- Hey, 'not long after' is vague enough to work regardless? (Shifty eyes) Panicked revision underway
About that incredible theory, Starlight and Twilight, hmm. Furiously sweat-dropping while looking over the later chapters
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sorry, I make a lot of comments because fimfiction have it so each one is tied to a single chapter.
I read "Twilight plays with her very sense of self by mingling with an alien artifact." as "Twilight plays with herself by mingling with an alien artifact."
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This overloaded my emotion suppression programs. I had to reboot several times. This story is underrated and I hope to find more like it in the future.
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Huh, I hadn't thought about greed from that perspective. So greed isn't bad and it could be good for you, though moderation is needed. I can see the merit there. Very enlightening.
The Twilicane beats everything.
Kettle call pot....
They going to become god of new world lol
We got a harem boi. Threesome is awesome.
This is one of author's longest fic and one of most boring one. Protaganists in all mindmelt story are all competent. But only this story has future knowledge and ability to enacted the plan perfectly as a team. Make it truly boring after a while.