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A poorly timed schedule results in Guy's Night getting Canceled! And while the other ponies have something to occupy their time, Discord makes his fun occupying other's times. It'll take a lot more than an empty schedule to keep the Lord of Chaos down, and with Spike's help, he just might make this a day to remember!


Been eager to write about these two for a while now. I'm still a little new to this, so please bear with me!

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Comments ( 4 )

This is great fun and you've got a great handle on the voice of the characters.

There are a few mistakes here and there. For example you use odd or outright wrong words here and there. Like Ember standing on an outlooking clifff. It is overlooking. But they are minor gripes.

But very good. Consider me intrigued.

Let the craziness begins!!

In the event of calming Spike down, Ember can be use as an eye candy for Spike.

I know what Spike and Ember should do.

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