When Applejack and Fluttershy are summoned by the Cutie Map to Las Pegasus to solve a friendship problem, Applejack thinks they are here to help the acrobatic and animal act to become friends again while Fluttershy tries to help Flim and Flam become friends again, but after Applejack over hears one of the directors say the acts would be better off some where else beside here at Gladmanes, Fluttershy agrees and suggests they get Flim and Flam to help. Now, Applejack and Fluttershy are working together with Flim and Flam to stop Mr.Gladmane from taking over Las Pegasus with his unfriendly ways. While they are their trying to stop Gladmane, Applejack is deciding whether or not she should tell Flim her feelings for him. After what had happened in Ponyville, Applejack is not sure what the outcome may be for the two. Will being able to work together bring the to two closer? What is going to happen between the two? Does Flim feel the same way about Applejack?
Sorry, but I don't find this romance dragged out long enough to be believable. If the story were a bit longer, I might find it otherwise but sadly here it just seems to happen a bit too fast for my liking. Sorry, but that's my opinion.
Thanks for the feedback. I will take that into account. I can edit the story anytime if it will improve your liking of the story.
I love this pairing, and I like the idea you lid of of Applejack's crush, but I have to agree with The Bricklayer---it seems a bit rushed. Then again, this isn't finished, so it could turn out to be interesting. Keep on writing
Yeah, I'm still working on it. I'm trying to expand how they come to like each other. I have others that are proofreading it, as well. Hopefully, over the weekend, I can have it finished. Thanks for the feedback!
Wow this is a very good story! Luv i! I really like the plot of the story. Oh and the cover art!
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Hey is it o.k if i add this story to one of my bookshelves? I wanted to ask you first.
Yeah! Absolutely
Oh my god! This was so cute!
Thanks!
One of the BEST MLP fanfictions I've EVER read! Flimjack is my FAVOURITE ship, and I just LOVE how you wrote it from Applejack and Flim's side of the story instead of Fluttershy and Flam like in the episode. That embracing/kissing bit at the end was just SO cute! AMAZING STORY!!
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Thank you soooo much! Flimjack is definitely my OTP. I'm working on another fic as well if you want to check it out. It's called Day after Day.