Taken from her confortable position on ponyville, Twilight is thrown into the midst of a civil war between Celestia and Luna. It's journey that will teach her about more than friendship. A story of love and hate, war and peace. When lives are on the line which side will Twilight take.
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Good story, but the massive amount of grammar mistakes (mainly forgetting the space bar) will make people not read it, although i will read it :D
I really enjoy this, but there are a lot of fixing to be done
When spelling and punctuation errors can be comfortably measured in average errors per sentence, it might be best if you copy/pasted anything you wrote into MSword or OpenOffice or something and used the spellchecker feature on it before posting it.
That will catch the vast majority of your errors and typos, resulting in much happier readers.
Spellcheck may introduce an incorrect word choice every now and then, but at that point friendly editor ponies can just drop comments here and there for you. :)