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The Lord Thunder


Starlight Glimmer is best pony!

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This story is a sequel to Love Keeps Dragon On: The Return of Sapphire


Spike and Sapphire have successfully rescued the ponies of Buckington from the Shadow Dragon empire, and things seem peaceful. However, a vengeful Zog launches a counterattack on the village, and an even more fearsome foe makes his presence known. Equestria will face a challenge like never before, a couple of new friends will lend their strength against the Shadow Dragons, and Spike and Sapphire's love for each other will be put to the ultimate test in this final entry of the Sapphire Trilogy.

Chapters (8)
Comments ( 46 )

Thus begins part three of this trilogy.

Also, why isn't there a "Romance" tag in this story like the two previous entries?

7581333 Thanks for calling that to my attention. Fixed.

7581917 You're most welcome. It wouldn't feel right without the romance tag.

I can't believe I didn't follow you when I finished Love Keeps Dragon On. I'm correcting that right now.

Liked, faved and tracked, btw. This trilogy is one of my favorites.

Talk about overbearing.

If you ask me, Gustwing should have listened and heeded Princess Luna's warnings.

I agree and I love this story a lot and can't wait for the author to upload more chapters to this story

Is there anyone who would be willing to help Equestria against the black dragons without hesitation or reluctance?!

"I wonder what happened here?" she wondered out loud.3

Yeup there's a three there.

Update coming soon, Pinkie Promise! :pinkiehappy:

This is terrible. Surely there must be something more powerful than the black dragons themselves.

Awesome chapter my friend and I can't wait for the next upload for this story I'll be waiting my friend and keep me posted on the story thanks

Well, hopefully things will get better for our heroes after things get dark enough. Because sooner or later a ray of bright light will pierce and vanquish the darkness.

It was a lot easier for me to find motivation to write back when I was getting all that positive response to the first story, now that I'm on #3 it's going largely ignored. I'm starting to wonder if the first one wasn't just a one hit wonder. :twilightoops:

8077362 this is a great story I started reading from the first story and it just got better from there.

Thank goodness that we now have Princess Luna present in the fray.

That last part where the dragon guard woke up. Isn't suppose Celestia that remarks about him falling asleep and not Luna?

It's a pity that isn't anything that can scare or intimidate Black Dragons.

I love this story I hope the next one is called SON OF Sapphire and spike in which it's shows the next generation where now it's on spikes and Sapphire's kid who returns to ponyville with a love from a filly he met in his childhood.

I love this story I hope he makes more 😁😁😁😁

Comment posted by Starwoilf deleted Nov 11th, 2017

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I love this story I hope the next one is called SON OF Sapphire and spike in which it's shows the next generation where now it's on spikes and Sapphire's kid who returns to ponyville with a love from a filly he met in his childhood P.S I hope the kid is called Storm Fire.😎

I hope there son is is called TERRA ARCANE and the filly he is with through out the story could be named RENA hey its just an idea

Read the last 2 stories every night for 3 days, get to this....hiatus NOOOOOOO

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Sincerest apologies, but I don't know if I'm going to finish this. It's pretty much ran out of steam and I've got other projects I'm working on. Feel like I've let everyone down, but it just doesn't have the magic that the first story did.

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well that sucks, but it's common, best of luck with future projects.

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"So, when you say our story's not getting finished, is that like a 'NEVER EVER'...? Or... is it more of a 'not now because I don't feel inspired but maybe later' sort of thing?"

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More than likely, it might never be finished. I apologize sincerely, but the inspiration and impact this series once had isn't there anymore. Right now I'm in the process of creating a better planned story with a more defined OC to counter the "cookie cutter story" complaints I've received of the last two stories in this series.

:rainbowderp: Fanart? On one of my stories? That's a first! I'm very flattered! :raritystarry:

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"Well hey, look, two completed stories is a heck of a lot more than what most get, right? We can make do."
"Yeah..."


(Here's hoping your next story's just as awesome! I'll be keeping my eye out!)

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Awwwwwwwww! That is super-cute!

Another thing, the sequel started in 2012-2013. The series has changed quite a bit since I started it. A lot of the stuff I have here isn't canon anymore. (Applejack marrying a Pear, for instance.)

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(Could... I maybe get a hint on the... composition of the new ship? Y'know?)

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Right now I'm in the process of creating a better planned story with a more defined OC

(That one? Pretty please?)

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Holy Celestia, I'm sorry it took so long to reply to this, but I have that story and its prequel up now:

The Early Life of Pearl Blush (Prequel)

Tears for the Pearl (Main Story)

Enjoy!

Honesty, I think I just took the Sapphire series in the wrong direction. I should have kept them as the cute, bubbly romance that the first was instead of making the sequels cookie-cutter adventure stories...

And I did it again, came across this story for a third time after reading the others...and its canceled this time, I'll go cry myself to sleep now

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Aw, now I feel sad. :fluttershysad:

Honestly, I think it's just been too long and it's lost too much steam. Plus the show has changed enough that much of this isn't relevant anymore.

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But that's the best thing about stories, they dont have a set path, they can be as random as you want, the loss of motivation is understandable though.

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I hope you continue this series, even though I haven’t read it.

This was one of the best story lines i have had the joy of reading If it dose come back one day i would be delighted to give it more of my time reading

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