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Harmony Split


Love has no desire but to fulfill itself. To melt and be like a running brook that sings its melody to the night. To wake at dawn with a winged heart and give thanks for another day of loving

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It was fun to read and of course editing this!
Hope we can still work together in the future! :)

Cheers!
\m/

I already love this

10/10 can't wait for more :twilightsmile:

Well, I love me some OctaScratch, so I can't wait to see how this story turns out! :heart:

OH MY CELESTIA! I loled at this whole chapter. So funny. :rainbowlaugh: Hyped for more! :pinkiehappy: :heart:

This sounds really good so far. I can't wait for more.

That was a very solidly written introduction. I'm really excited to see where this goes! :raritystarry:

This is a great read, keep up the good work!

This is the last *clean* chapter!
You have been warned!

:pinkiegasp:

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Let the smut begin!:trollestia:

Soon

Maybe

Next Chapter

7624883

Oh dear, oh dear. My poor innocent pony feathers are going to be all ruffled.

Should we shout?
Should we scream?
What happened
To the clop-less dream?

Oh, Scratchie,
Scratchie, what did we do?

Rest in Peace: Octavia's little head-pony.

7627279
Nothing bad, to be honest. :scootangel:
I really like the story and it's nice to be part of the editing team. :pinkiehappy:

Song for the story:

Cheers!

Oh dear god Vinyl, what have you done?! :rainbowlaugh:

Here Lies
Octavia's Cello
May he rest in pieces around that too-horny-for-her-own-good unicorn's neck for all time.


Also, Vinyl Scratch.

oh... well... that escalated quickly

The Ship has left the port!! :)

Nice work you two. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Why do you think so many people pair up Vinyl Scratch with Octavia?

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Opposites attract.
That they are both Musicians and Hasbro also brings them together in some ways helps

Dear Celestia is this the funniest chapter I have ever read! Wow, just wow. JUST WOW!

It's so fast paced! I don't know why, but I love it! Don't change it

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Once upon a time,

There was a young man named psp7master. Since his early childhood, he had wanted to become a sailor. Because he loved SHIPS. So he embanked on a glorious quest to find the greatest ship guru who lived on the top of the mountain not far from Manehattan. Okay, maybe it wasn't exactly a mountian. Maybe it was a penthouse suite. Still. He embanked on that journey, and it took him forty bits and a half-hour cab ride, but he was there, in the pent- erm, on the top of the mountain, talking to the guru, who may or may not go under the name ScratchnTavi.

So he asked her: "How do I ship more ships?"

And she smiled and said: "You have shipped enough. There is only one ship that you need, and that ship is OctaScratch."

And thus he saw the Truth, and the Truth opened up his eyes.

Since then he has been writing OctaScratch and praising the glory of the ship.

(It's not like this answers your question in any manner, just felt like writing this whole thing.)

a race as intelligent horses. And have not yet invented a vasine or magic To inhibit heat or relieve symptoms = /

Anyway, I follow your story from the beginning, and I trust it's pretty good.

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That would be an interesting concept, but I guess it's because heat is key to mating, and they live in what we can assume to be late renaissance. But maybe it's also because being sexually attractive to everyone isn't as horrible as hemorrhaging for five days.
Or maybe I'm over thinking this...

Anyway, GG! I've been waiting forever for this update and when I saw updates in my folders I nearly did a backflip! Can't wait to see more :3

7708543

Heh, Sorry.
Life was in the way, so I hope we were able to do you all right with two chapters.
Nine should follow much sooner :twilightsmile:

7707486
What furious said.
While I have no doubt the unicorns and alicorns could invent a spell against the heat,
I more suspect they don't purely out of the sexually aspect.
Did you ever heard of a mare that went without partner or unsatisfied through her heat?
I never did, so I think it gots it advantages.

Well ... that just happend! :D

It's always fun to do editings for you. :pinkiehappy:

See ya next time.
Cheers!
\m/

7708543 thanks =), but But I would tell that to a vet, Because different from an inrational animal puts them in my view has a choice, as octavia in telling the vinyl to leave the room, if you have heard, when the animals enter the heat is as if they are receiving a dose of drug that makes them attracted by Sex, but in my view the ponies have already evolved and as you can see in this episode, octavia makes it seem like making love to someone she likes just because it's in the heat is something wrong, and also different from an inrrational animal they can choose Have children or not.
Mares in the middle of work beginning to think about sex because he had an early or late heat, Would hinder development, Would be considered a national health problem. oh And human women she suffered with colic, we found a way in it =)

Obs, there is vaccine for mare and other animals do not enter the heat in the real world, Should not be so hard to think of a way to add this in the MLP universe =)
I already read a fic where Twi forgets to take his pullets for heat, well you can already imagine what happens during the course of the story = 0
And mares when they are in heat they really get aggressive and can even hurt the stallion at the moment of riding.

Can respond with what you want =) I also write fanfics and I like to exchange ideas with people who have another point of view about what I think

You know, i always find it interesting that you're ao evil to your namesakes in these stories... Then again, im evil to my characters too so. XD

...Why do I get the feeling that things are not going to be gumdrops and icecream when they snap out of it?

The poor head ponies suffer such abuse! I think I'll form the Society for the Prevention of Cruelty to Head Ponies.

Pet

This should be... entertaining.

Oh man! Looks like Vinyl may be getting into more than she bargained for! XD

George Takei said it best: "Oh, my!"

Whoops.

“Did you just made that up?”

made -> make
Sorry. :facehoof:

Hahaha :rainbowlaugh: This... this was a solid read, of which I approve!

Nicely done man

Damn, like 7685347 said this is fast paced, but it certainly fits and I love it.

Also, I adore the soulmate talk, that was adorable as shit and I love the idea behind the two halves thing.

Hohohoho, what a nice chapter this was, hohoho :trollestia:
Last Clean Chapter eh?
I like.

Hahahahaahahahah! :rainbowlaugh: Ooooooh Lawdy!
What a chapter.

Mmmm... tasty~ :heart: A nice chapter, good show!

Damn this is deliciously well done, like a nice sandwich...
Nice job!

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