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Cadence is left with a life altering decision that will not only affect her, but other members of the Sparkle family, and the Equestrian Empire.

Left with a difficult yet almost impossible decision, she prevails and makes a choice. How will it fare against her and others around her?

Birthday present for ChappedPenguinLips

Mocha Star

Thank you guys for helping me out in such a short time window! I appreciate it!

Chapters (2)
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Comments ( 19 )

Sad. Very sad. The Alicorn curse.


It is a curse, indeed.

Thanks for reading. :twilightsmile:

Don't forget to add the Cadance tag. I'd add Shining too; his presence is heavy here, even though he features only indirectly.


What the...How'd did I forget that?



7606029 so is there going to be another chapter or chapters added to the story? And if so is it going to end up as a Twidence story or......?

Well. You good sir/madam, have my attention!

I hate you for doing this to me.

> smashes upvote button over and over


Oh, lookie, it's Cloud Hop! :raritywink:

Thanks dude! :twilightsmile:

good story but make me wonder what will happen next


I have the last few chapters planned out.

There's definitely more to come! :twilightsmile:

I really love the way you have Cadance portrayed here. I can almost feel her pain, her denial, and it's heartbreaking.


It was difficult for me to get into her head so profoundly. Surprised you picked that up. :twilightsheepish:

This may only be the first chapter, but I can tell this is going to be really good.

Once more, speechless.

I might redact my promise to read more of your works; I can't get this fucked up every night...

wow just wow exultant story.
the curs of the Alicorn.
I would normally never do this but this story goes so good and complements the story I will post.
the pain of eternity

I am afraid this isn't a story, I don't know the setting from the get go, no visual clues, but reading through I found it perfect for an audio reading.
This has the material to maximize a youtuber like Scribbler messability. I know that isn't a word, but neither is nervacited so cut me some slack. What I mean is that it carries the potential for an audio performer to mess around, add sound effects to create the mood this piece is going for.
That is why I say it is not a story, but part of one. That other part comes with the added sense of hearing

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