I'm a girl living in Ashley, New Milton. Loved mlp ever since it started showing and got to learn about these fanfic in October 2013. (Also I have dyslexia, so if I make mistakes sorry)
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Conk sucking...
*pegasus
It's a typo somewhere.
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Where exactly?
what the hell is a Conk?
7777140 sorry typo
7777153 LOL no wonder why google had no idea what i was asking for.
I noticed quite a few typos (including "conk" a few more times) and at least one misuse of words ("cease" vs. "seize").
Also, you may want to do some research before you use "thou" and "thee."
I couldn't stop laughing at all the conk sucking, and I had to seize reading.
7778341 Thanks for the help - hope it's fixed now
7778548 If you're just going to laugh at my mistakes I should tell you I have dyslexia
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And how, exactly, was I supposed to know something like that about you? For what it's worth, I wasn't having a laugh at you personally, I was laughing at this fic specifically, as It is an objectively bad piece of writing, and also porn. That's a pretty funny combination. Please don't post a piece of fiction if you aren't prepared for a public reaction that includes mildly negative feedback. Please do keep writing, improving, and trying your best. I can honestly say, I wish you the best of it.
7781582 I can take it down if you think I should
I wasn't all that happy with it anyway, it was just something I pulled together
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Please don't take it down because of me. It is your work, and my opinion should not stop you from writing and publishing your own fiction. I wish you all the best in your future endeavors!
It was a bit rushed but i love hope to see more