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Needs proofreading, several spelling mistakes littered around the page. The actual clop could do with being longer, and more detailed.
8130868 Thanks for the feedback. I'll keep it in mind for future stories.
Pretty simple but still fun, wasn't expecting this pairing. And damn funny too, good work
I would really suggest using grammarly app for "proofreading"
This is what the free account would give you :)
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Also loving the story.
8135451 Thanks for the tip.
Control.
The clop itself was pretty mechanical, I'd suggest working on detailing what the characters are feeling over what they're doing.
-TheBritishPony
Basically this. Also, is this impreg or just in-heat bucking? I have a couple of groups for it if it's the prior.
This was a very interesting and funny crack shipping.
was just browsing and along came this little number.....lost my shit at the title.
Our hormones can't repel ass of that magnitude!
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Get your shit back right this instant!
How can you be so narcissistic YOU LIVE ON A ROCK FARM