• Member Since 1st Nov, 2011
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Lucefudu


Iatrogenesisist extraordinaire!

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Left isolated in this crimson space of nothingness.
Only the darkness keeps me company, but that is not enough.
I've observed happier folk that do not suffer like me- Why am I not one of them?
I wish my rage to consume over my boundaries.
I will soon bare freedom, and smother the galaxy with my bare emotion.
Then I will not suffer alone.
Emotion... will exist no more!

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 26 )

Musical Credits:
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Why is 0² the white one?
Why is everything else black?

810777

Why is 0² the white one?

I think it's because it's trying to look like an angel and faking it.

810777 And you say I'm the better writer... HA, this goes beyond what I could ever hope to do, you silly filly. Amazing job once again.

so will this continue or is this it?

814094 Is the story marked as complete?

such a pity since i wanted to continue

Wow... I dont really know what else to say other then "Good". Makes you think, no?

Huh...

Well, I get the feeling this has something to do with 02, but I honestly can't see much of a connection to MLP at all...

814766 Then read it again.

810777

Why is 0² the white one?

Because it is a oxygen molecule

I'll leave now

Kind of hard to follow along at first. It still didn't make much sense to me, but you get an A for effort. I won't thumb it up or down. I remain neutral.

815290 But when ultra-violet radiation hits the 2p^4 orbital of the Oxygen atoms that form the molecule, they go to an hyperexcited state and, since such state is volatile, the electron is forced to is previous low-energy state, sending forth a kind of wave of its own; one with the wavelength of about 475 nm.
(TL;DR: It's blue.)

815293 It's OK. But I'd just like to say that it isn't a random, nonsensical story. It's more like one of those stories you have to think a little to fully grasp what it is about.

810777
Come on dude, if you're gonna post music at least use the high quality version:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iOVzFJPVrDs&feature=related

816629 I actually preferred the other vers. But that is fine too, I guess.

This is too dark and trippy for me, I'm afraid. :twilightblush: But it certainty is interesting!

As you can see from Dash's Tears In The Rain, I prefer my dark fics to have lots of shades of love in them, with more of a grey-tone than a purely black one.

So... I don't know with the mods. Did they kill this story or what happened? :rainbowderp:

HOLY SHIT! Zero-Two is the force behind the stars? Shit just got real.

On a related note: I believe this mix would go well with the story http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=l6yL3qQUDYQ&feature=related

820125 URE JUST DOING THIS CUZ URE JELOUS OF MY ASPERGER'S-TIER AUTISM POINTS! I'M CALLING THE MODS ON U!!1

I don't know what this is...

...but I kinda like it.

I love this story but its not very pony related, It is related, but just barely.

Kirby sucks. -_-

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