This story is a sequel to Loyalty to the King
Slight gore in chapter 2.
Sombra and Rainbow Dash took over the Crystal Empire, Equestria now finds itself at war. Then after the first major battle Sombra makes an unexpected move, a peace treaty. But what will it mean for the future of both nations.
Cover art by SpectrumBlaze on DeviantArt.
Tags may be subject to change depending on how the story progresses.
Made the popular stories 9/17/16.
A/N: Even though the cover art is bad ass it's not what Rainbow will be wearing in the story. Also certain events won't happen like Twilight becoming a princess as it took all the elements to make her into an alicorn.
Chapters (3)
This was AMAZING!!! Im so excited for chapter 3!!! Im suprised Shining didnt attack Sombra and Rainbow when they first came in xD
I think you mean certain. It looks like an interesting story, but you might want an editor.
7571681
Thank you for pointing that out. I'm not the best speller at times.
7571695 No problem. Although I do encourage an editor to at least help with spelling. It happens to a lot of writers, but it looks more appealing to people if it's spelled right.
Reading the first chapter, I would slow down the pacing. Everything is happening quite fast. Also perhaps you don't need an editor for spelling, but many writers tend to have one as they can be of great help. But I do think this sounds like a good story to write.
7571732
Yeah, not the best at pacing either, but I will do my best.
HONESTLY WHAT'S WITH PEOPLE AND BREAKING LUNA'S HORN IN THESE TYPE OF FICS!?
7571798
I would have broken Celestia's and Cadence's too but I couldn't make it work. The only reason Luna's broke is because it had cracks in it.
7571817 I know. It just seems so unfair that it's always Luna. Personally I'd like it to happen to Trixie or somepony else that is less important.
Well of course there is Twilight! There’s several things you can do! While one of these things is listen to the Princess because she knows what she’s talking about, ANOTHER one of these things is finding Scootaloo and telling her what happened! And by that, I, of course, mean telling her that her hero, Rainbow Dash, was killed while defending the Crystal Empire from Sombra and an evil Pegasus named Spectrum Flash! You know, the way that Obi-Wan Kenobi told Luke Skywalker that Darth Vader killed Anakin Skywalker, even though they’re the same person? In order to ensure that Scootaloo spends all of her time training to become the best fighter ever (hatred is a powerful motivator, and nothing encourages hatred like loss), you should tell her that Rainbow Dash’s final words were about the plucky young filly that was her biggest fan!
Chapter 1 Errors and Corrections
ALL ABLE BODY PONIES ARE HEREBY REQUESTED TO ENLIST!
We need to ensure that it’s defended so we can use it as a staging area to launch an attack of our own,” Shining said.
You’re better off staying out of this and returning to Ponyville,” said Celestia.
We’ve already lost Rainbow Dash to Sombra, if any of you were to die in battle than the situation would only get worse.
I ship this ship way too much for my liking
All right. So...I'm beginning to feel like this. Scootaloo, anybody? Like...anyone at all? Does anyone agree with me that the mysterious absence of Scootaloo is...well...really, really annoying?
I mean, sure, I've been able to overlook it thus far, but...
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Now, if Scootaloo was somehow killed in the first story, than I could understand. But then she'd at least have been mentioned in that story! Instead, we are at the sequel to Loyalty to the King, and she hasn't been mentioned once! That other reaction gets to take a backseat to this reaction! Mostly that last word.
This is a great story
7572116
Don't you worry. Scootaloo will be in this story! She will have a role to play in all this.
Also did you get my response to your PM.
I normally don't root for the villain, but the villain not only has love on their side, but also Best Pony. Plus, I'm finding SombraDash kind of cute.
There needs to be more fanfics like this
Oh boy new chapter. But damn the Russian ponies failed at keeping the stalliongrab, however if they touch the potatos that they use for vodka then rainbow and sombra are doomed
7573286
Stalliongrad, you mean?
7575553 yes, i knew I fucked somewhere
do more when is next chapter!!!!!!????????
7596678
Hopefully this weekend.
7597213
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7583023
True...but Stalliongrab is funnier...
7599162 I'll admit, that was funnier
Dark times are coming ....
Do you know if SpectrumBlaze does requests?
7704937
I do not. You would have to ask him.
Awesome!
Dun dun dun~! I was waiting for this. ^^
Ok, good story so far, well, no offence but I don't really support the ship and even more so with the... uhh, sex tag.... yup, age inappropriate
More?
Write more please too good and can't wait to read more!
P.S.: Who thinks the same as me, like. :D
Chapter three corrections:
This should be THOSE WHO ARE INTERESTED MAKE YOUR WAY TO THE PERSONNEL ON THE RIGHT.”
This should be Those that could flee the Crystal Empire by ship or air did, but the grand majority of ponies didn’t.
This should be Not to mention we lost Manehattan, one of our biggest and most economic cities!
After the cargo was loaded the train left for the Crystal Empire, but retrieving the bits wasn’t its only mission.
Love it please continue
MOREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
When is that next chapter comes?
8033075
Not sure, have a lot going on at the moment.
8033164 Let us when it is arrived ok?
7571798 because Luna is best pony plus she is most powerful pony
7572072 Spectrum Flash sounds like an excellent Nightmare name for RD.
8033164
Hope you're able to fix what's going on in your life!
Long live the crystal empire! May the reign of King Sombra and Queen Rainbow Dash last a thousand years!
Deeeeeeeed
8272600
What?
8272611
Have not seen update in long time means story dead
8273556
I will get back to my stories. I just have other priorities in my life at the moment.
8273586
ok