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Cutie mark crusaders: taking time away from the mane six before starlight and the young six made it cool

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Reginald Wingert, or "Grandpa Gruff" as his Granddaughter, Gilda Gryphonstain refers to him as, is dead.

With her sister and her cousins 8 hours away, her mother appearing ti have disappeared, and the fact that Her dad is also dead and his side of the family either dead or living by a lake somewhere in the toenail of Alaska and her not wanting much to do with their weird antics anyway, as well as recently losing her job at Crystal Prep's radio station she has no choice to move in the ridiculously tiny with her only close relative, her A-ma Martina, who she doubts she can keep living on her own anymore.


But what else can she do, it's not like her old friend Dashie will forgive her and take her old friend in right now.

Right?


spacial thanks to nightwalker for his editing work


Currently being rewritten as I have realized this story is a mess

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I can help you with some of the Spanish :derpytongue2: (people in the north of Mexico speak different to the ones in the center like me, so it might sound weird to them)

Uh, hola? Estoy de vuelta desde el aeropuerto, que tenía que conducir todo el camino a Toronto y vuelta

Uh. Hora? Volví del aeropuerto, tuve que conducir todo el camino hacia Toronto y de vuelta

¿Toronto lo es que, al igual que una nueva banda?

¿Toronto, que es eso, una nueva banda?

Oh, eso es, con perdón

Oh, esta bien, perdoname

¿Uh, estabas pensando en tener compañía durante?

Here “durante” is not necessary also it sounded better like “pensabas tener compañía”

Por qué sí, su gran tío Gabriel, y su gran tía Helen, thy deben estar en la habitación de invitados en este momento, oye Gabe, Helen

Porsupuesto que si, su tío abuelo Gabriel y su tía abuela Helen... The rest is good

Correcto. ¿qué año es esto, Gilda?

Correcto, en que año estamos?

Seguro que agarró la botella derecha o algo?

Segura que agarraste la botella correcta?

Sólo tenía el baño más vigorizante

Tuve el baño más vigorizante <- this sounds funny because no one use that word to describe a bath

THANK YOU. THANK YOU FOR GETTING GILDA.

MJP

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thanks But now I use colored text for foriegn languages, so that's no longer necessary

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