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Kuairu


The legal illegal. AT SOME POINT I WILL UPDATE.


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So you know how that whole My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic show is going on? You know, the show for little kids that's basically a marketing ploy for toys?

Well, I found one of those toys while I was walking. It had colorful hair, a white coat, wings, and a horn. I wanted to give it to my sister as a gift.

Then apparently the toy is possessed by demons who claim to be Princess Celestia from the show. Either that or the real Princess Celestia figured out how to cross the divide between dimensions and just likes to visit me and cause problems in a body that fits in my hand.

Whatever the case may be, just remind me that I need to call my therapist later.


A Pony on Earth story that started with a conversation about Toy Story and this picture.

Art credit to polishcrossoverfan.

Chapters (7)
Comments ( 328 )

They tiny little things, aren't they?

Hm, you've certainly caught my attention.

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My thoughts about this story in a nutshell.
If this is continued I will probably have a dawgasm.

Interesting. Very interesting.

The premise is good, the characters are ok for now, the pacing is fine. You may proceed.

I keep my eye on this to see where it goes....
*i totally did not follow this because of your profile pic as well*

I want a miniature Celestia now, badly. :rainbowwild:

7554696 No, it's first person, from Collin's eyes.

This is it, this kind of story is why I choose to read fanfiction!

~Leonzilla

MOAR!........if it's not any trouble..........

I like this! There is one thing i thought was a little weird, though. So millie sounds like she's pretty young, and seeing her say mother instead of mom was a bit jarring. I dunno if she's older than i'm thinking or what. Just my 2 cents

Well, it's certainly an adorable concept... and I'm liking the writing style... alright. Let's see where this goes.

Congrats on the feature.

I did what any calm and rational individual would do in that event.
I fainted.

What else is there to do?


Nice premise!

It's on my tracking-list. I'm curious where it goes.

I'll never look at my vinyl pop figure of celestia the same way again... I'm getting it-her a tiny bed, brb.

7555790 I don't know why I was featured.

It was probably the tiny horse.

I'd have screamed, personally. But fainting works too.

Good start, looking forward to more. :pinkiehappy:
You should have ended the chapter with Collin picking up a flyswatter and smacking tiny Celestia.:pinkiecrazy:

Now, see, I like to think of myself as a calm and rational individual. You don’t get to my situation in life without having a harder brain and maybe a colder heart. So, seeing as how a creature from what I assumed was from a show that my little sister likes to watch was now currently on my table complaining about something, I did what any calm and rational individual would do in that event.

I fainted.

or panic, or kill it with fire

Also an acceptable reaction:

Damn fine...

Great job, I want to see more, if it's not too much of a hassle.

Good so far. Only thing i don't like is that it's a confirmed toy at first. This means that Celestia must have used some sort of spell to become it, or replace it. I was kind of hoping for something like it was Tiny Celestia from the start passed out, and it seemed like a really life-like mini toy or something. Because all i can think of is those shitty plastic McDonalds toy becoming her. In which case, “Oh, darn, the spell is malfunctioning…” is something extremely major. I hope this gets explained of the toy to real transformation.

Interesting, definitely would like to see where this goes.

I just remembered I have a Twilight mini doll that my ex gave me as a gift locked in my nightstand, I'm giving her a proper place right now

So you know how that whole My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic show is going on? You know, the show for little kids that's basically a marketing ploy for toys?

Are we talking about the same show here? Because last I checked there was more porn of this show being made by the cloppers than there was toys.

I mean, I'm more than happy to be proven wrong but...

7556916 Get a Spike to go with her. Give her some company.

7556390

I hope this gets explained of the toy to real transformation.

Well, they do often say that crystal meth is a heck of a drug...

7555890 Probably. There was another story before yours about tiny horses. I think it was focused around Twilight Sparkle. Since your story has a similar sort of concept it might be why it was featured. Not that I'm trying to say it's a bad thing of course. You're in the Featured box so you should do what you can to stay in there and keep those clopfics from getting a spot, dude!

7555660 Maybe the characters are British? We say 'mother' or 'mum' a lot.

Although due to my time spent around American bronies and my previous holidays to America I myself have taken to calling my mother 'mom' and my father 'man with bald spot'.

7557034 perhaps, I'll see it to finding a Spike

I thought there was a sex/romance tag before?

Interesting start. Let's see if you can keep it up.

7557050
For me spending time speaking to British Bronies has got me saying 'mum' all the time. It only confuses people more when they try to figure out where I'm from.

ugh, these scenario's would be so much more believable if they bred or genetically engineered insects/weta to look like ponies... then being possessed by demons would go unquestioned.

7557300 Last minute changes on a character sheet I have for the story.

Quite a good start. Let's see where it goes from here on :pinkiehappy:

I did what any calm and rational individual would do in that event.

I fainted.

See, that right there's yer problem. I'm manic and insane and a mad scientist with delusions of god-hood.

I'd be squealing with delight that super-powers exist and I could hijack them to TAKE OVER THE MULTIVERSE!! MUWAH HA HA HA! :pinkiecrazy:

Hmm, just dropping down here to leave a comment to show my support. I'm definitely liking the story, and your writing style has that personal way about it that always gets a smile out of me. ^u^ Good luck!

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