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Kikio3000


Hello everyone! It's story time! God bless you! | Christian, Female, Early 20's, British, Straight, Single. Birthday: Feb 13. Profile pic: pmbsakura37.

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The mane 6 now have their boyfriends (Pinkie had helped out her friends get/go through with their dates). Pinkie is now going to ship Princess Sunset Shimmer with somepony (or somebody). Welp, Sunny's in for on heck of a time on this dating site!

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This is an absolute mess. The formatting is wonked, the pacing is awful, and the writing itself is erratic and hard to follow.

7564053 Exact reason why I fucking hate you, because you talk about how bad a story is, then never give any advice. At least I complimented on YOUR story, and you took it as an insult, ten you block me before I could explain, jumping the gun much?

It's not going to be an issue that Neon Lights goes to Crystal Prep?

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My friend, I'm gonna have to disagree with you here. Myril technically is giving constructive criticism. Both of you are! It's just the way you two give it.

Some people, such as you and I, will give a friendlier approach to criticism. We'll try and make it come off soft and kind. Talk about the flaws and sugarcoating it to spare the author's feelings. Like a teacher would to a student. And to some people, that will definetly help them improve.

And some other people, like Myril, will give a harder and more harsh approach. They don't care about sparing feels, just getting to the point. They'll try and help you, but more in a tough friend way. These people will directly tell the author what's wrong with their story, and in some cases, that might be it, but that doesn't mean they aren't helping.

Please read his comment again:

This is an absolute mess. The formatting is wonked, the pacing is awful, and the writing itself is erratic and hard to follow.

Myril is giving everything that he thinks the author needs to fix. He is indeed giving them advice. Just not in the way that some other people would get.

I mean, even the author themselves thanked Myril for his comment. Which just proves that this author will take any criticism they will get, and I'll definetly respect that! But again sir, just because a person might do things different than you, doesn't exactly mean you have the right to hate them. In fact, hating anything in general is a bit harsh…

As for the other thing, well, that's between you two. :pinkiesmile:

–TheGingerWitch

Firebrand aka The Fiery Joker aka Josh Scorcher.
One of the big names among the MLP:FiM Analysts.

7564336 Actually I'm not pissed about the comment he made, I'm pissed because he's an asshole to me

7564395 Could that possibly be because of the incredibly hostile PMs you sent me here and on Fanfiction.net that were laden with insults and profanities and threats? Could that be, perhaps, the reason I've blocked you everywhere you've tracked me down? All because I asked you a legitimate question, with no malice or hostility whatsoever, one time and ONLY one time?

Nah, obviously the problem's with me and my attitude. Yeah.

7564417 No, that was WAY before fanfiction. I complimented on your story once, and you took the most unimportant part of it, and turned it into a fight, then you blocked me before I could even explain myself. Again, jumping the gun there a bit. And now I've been wanted to clear things up with you!

7564417 How could I PM you on here, when you blocked me? Hm can you- can you answer that, hm weeeell there was that one pm I sent you on fanfiction, but the important thing was that you blocked me, and I never sent you a PM on here. How can I possibly PM you here?

7564417 Look, I'll be honest with you, I don't want to fight with you, I just want an apology

7564053 Actually you know what, fuck the apology, I already said why I hate you... nuff said

Meeester
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Enough. Clearly you two don't get along. If someone's blocked you, that is not an invitation to go out of you way to continue arguing over nothing on someone else's story, group, etc. You're blocked, clearly that means stop talking to each other.

If you make a habit of this you risk earning yourself another ban.

Oh dang! Sorry that you guys disagree with my story! :applecry: Thanks Meeester! :pinkiehappy:


Anyway, thank you to EVERYONE who likes it! :)

7564840 the first ban was bullshit, alright. Someone set me up on that ban... I no longer have a reason to fight with him anymore good day to all of you

Don't let some people get you down. You got a fun concept here. Keep it up.

That argument, it really had no reason to be taken this publicly. Especially since the guy kept on continuing even though Myril stop. :rainbowhuh:

Thanks guys! :D I'll keep the great stories up! :)

This is the most amount of view that I've had in two days! XD ;) :rainbowkiss:

7564871 You know what? The story probably isn't the best thing out there, but the way you handle your response towards all this mess in the comments is something I can admire. I applaud you, ma'am.

Sweet - Love the way Pinkie sets her up and then leaves her to it!

Like you, I think Rainbow Rocks is a really cool movie, and I've watched it almost as many times as the 2017 movie!

:pinkiehappy:

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Thank you! And yeah, also, thanks for the love on this story! I find it an embarasing idea, so I'm glad people still like it! XD

It would be nice to see this story complete :eeyup:. Maybe, there'll be more chapters? I wouldn't want to read, and then stop halfway through :twilightsheepish:.

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Thanks for the support, and I should be finishing it...um...this year! Yeah...

(XD, sorry - I've just been busy)

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Kind of, but even after I finish my work, I run into writer's block, then have to work again. Heh, I'll try and finish my work earlier and possibly get this out around June. :twilightsheepish:

Well... This is bizarre...

Funny thing: this was promised to be finished in 2019... But not one chapter has been added since 2016...

As said, the chapter is bizarre. Could be a good thing...

Still tracking!

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