• Published 20th Sep 2016
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Raripire and DJ Pon-Vamp - Kikio3000

So, it appears the rumors are true...DJ Pon-3 and even Rarity have been bitten by bat-ponies...vampire ones! Vampire bat ponies are now common in Equestria, but who would have thought that two heroes would have been affected by them?!

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(Comedy) The Monster Mash and Thriller Night song!

At the Ponyville Halloween party, everypony was in great spirits and some ponies played on the Wii while the others danced the music. The mane 6 are now adults, and everypony has different costumes on. It is almost midnight, so some were tired, however, the sleep ones where woken up by all of the pomp and pleasure. The rest of the villagers were eating or dancing to the Monster Mash song on the Pony-Wii's "Just Dance II game". They were enjoying themselves!

Yeeaaaah! The town hall echoed with the thundering of stomping hooves, then everypony sang along with the song!:

Song - Monster Mash by Bobby Pickpony on the Pony-Wii

Sung by the Pony-Wii and the townsponies!:

I was working in the lab late one night
When my eyes beheld an eerie sight
For my monster from his slab began to rise
And suddenly to my surprise

All of the ponies walked around like zombies, forehooves out in front of them, and all of them had tired or derpy expressions on their faces.

He did the mash
He did the monster mash
The monster mash
It was a graveyard smash
He did the mash
It caught on in a flash
He did the mash
He did the monster mash

Everypony then shook their hooves in the air, and silently pretended to cures at nothing in particular.

From my laboratory in the castle east
To the master bedroom where the vampires feast
The ghouls all came from their humble abodes
To get a jolt from my electrodes

Everypony danced in whatever style they wanted - even Twilight, the worst dancer there! XD

They did the mash
They did the monster mash
The monster mash
It was a graveyard smash
They did the mash
It caught on in a flash
They did the mash
They did the monster mash

Everypony decided to pretend that they were monster ponies such as the shadow ponies. DJ Pon-3 took off her cool glasses to reveal that her eyes had flashed red from its original purple color. She then happily danced with Rarity and Octavia.

The zombie-ponies were having fun
The party had just begun
The guests included Wolfcolt
Flutterbat and her son

(I wish I had a son... ) Fluttershy thought, though she then caught herself.

(Wait a second! I'm not Flutterbat!)

The scene was rockin', all were digging the sounds
Igor on chains, backed by his baying hounds
The coffin-bangers were about to arrive
With their vocal group, "The Crypt-Kicker Five"

The Ponytones then harmonized together.

They played the mash
They played the monster mash
The monster mash
It was a graveyard smash
They played the mash
It caught on in a flash
They played the mash
They played the monster mash

ROOOOOOOOOOOOAR! Hiiiiiisssssss! Fluttershy roared and hissed, playing her part of Flutterbat.

Out from his coffin, Flutterbat's voice did ring
Seems she was troubled by just one thing
She opened the lid and shook her fist
And said, "Whatever happened to my Transylvania twist?!" :flutterrage:

Fluttershy then turned to Rainbow Dash who was dressed up in a Shadowbolt Frankenstein pony costume. Suddenly, Fluttershy bashed her head into Rainbow Dash's back to prove her point.

OW! Grrrr! "Hey Flutterbat!" Dashie responded, "Your costume is becoming you! It's annoying! :("

It's now the mash
It's now the monster mash
The monster mash
And it's a graveyard smash
It's now the mash
It's caught on in a flash
It's now the mash
It's now the monster mash

DJ Pon-3 nodded her head to the beat.

Now everything's cool, Fluterbat's a part of the band
And my monster mash is the hit of the land
For you, the living, this mash was meant too
When you get to my door, tell them Boris sent you

Everypony laughed and twirled.

Then you can mash
Then you can monster mash
The monster mash
And do my graveyard smash
Then you can mash
You'll catch on in a flash
Then you can mash
Then you can monster mash!

Wooooooo! Everypony cheered and high-hoofed.

Just as all of the townsponies were REALLY enjoying themselves, Nightmare Moon...(or Luna in her evil form)...told DJ on-3 to stop the game and halt the music in order to get everypony's attention. Suddenly, Nightmare's hair flowed upwards, as lightning crashed while she cackled. She then talked in a hushed voice, then come shouting out in full soprano. Nightmare night...what a fright...give me something sweet to BITE!

AHHHHH! Everypony screamed then laughed, especially the children; they knew that they wouldn't be gobbled up by Luna! She then bellowed in the Royal "We" Canterlot voice;

"Now, my little ponies...stop messing around! This is not fun 'NightMare Night'... it's scary 'Nightmare Thriller Night!" Mwa-hahahhahaaaa!


Song by Michale Jack-pony:

"Thriller/Thriller Night", as sung by Nightmare Moon!

[Verse 1:]
It's close to Midnight Sparkle time; and something evil's lurking in the dark (It's me!!)
Under the moonlight you see a sight that almost stops your heart
You try to scream but terror takes the sound before you make it
You start to freeze as horror looks you right between the eyes,
You're paralyzed (heeheeheeheeeee!)

'Cause this is thriller, thriller night
And no one's gonna save you from the beast about to strike
You know it's thriller, thriller night
You're fighting for your life inside a killer, thriller tonight
I'm gonna get, something sweet to bite tonight!

[Verse 2:]
You hear the door slam and realize there's nowhere left to run
You feel the cold hand and wonder if you'll ever see the sun
You close your eyes and hope that this is just imagination
But all the while you hear the creature creepin'up behind
You're out of time (goodnight!)

'Cause this is thriller, thriller night
There ain't no second chance against the thing with forty eyes
You know it's thriller, thriller night
You're fighting to survive inside a killer, thriller tonight

Nightmare Moon kept hissing at the ponies and snapping her jaws at the foals. She was also performing a secret evil spell that nopony knew about. Celestia was too busy to notice, having turned into her former evil alter ego...Solestia; and was basking in her own 'perfect' radiance.

Night creatures call
And the dead start to walk in their masquerade
There's no escapin' the jaws of the alien this time (they're open wide)
This is the end of your life
(Bye my children!)

[Verse 3:]
They're out to get you, there's demon-ponies closing in on every side
They will possess you unless you change the number on your dial
Now is the time for you and I to cuddle close together
All thru the night I'll save you from the terrors on the screen,
I'll make you see....YEAH...see my teeeeeth!

That it's a thriller, thriller night
'Cause I can thrill you more than any ghost would dare to try
Girl, this is thriller, thriller night
So let me hold you tight and share a killer, diller, chiller
Thriller here tonight
Get a fright...Nightmare night!

Nightmare moon then finished her secret spell and roared to scare everypony so that not even Princess Twilight would suspect her suspeicous behavior.


[Rap - Vincent Price:]
Darkness falls across the land
The midnite hour is close at hand
Creatures crawl in search of blood
To terrorize y'awl's neighbourhood
And whosoever shall be found
Without the soul for getting down
Must stand and face the hounds of hell
And rot inside a corpse's shell
The foulest stench is in the air
The funk of forty thousand years
And grizzly ghouls from every tomb
Are closing in to seal your doom
And though you fight to stay alive
Your body starts to shiver
For no mere mortal can resist
The evil of the thriller
Can you dig it?! (I'm here...ready to feast and create the nightmares of the night, toniiiiiight!!)

Nightmare Moon would have eaten PipSqueak whole if he had jumped out of the way. He was scared of his favorite princess, but he knew that this was not her true form. Nightmare then maniacally laughed again, showing her sharp fangs, and trying to bite foals. his time, scared everypony in Ponyville, not just the guests at the party. Everyone then left; knowing that the party pooper was also in to end it. As they ponies left, they said goodbye to Princess Nightmare Moon, as she exclaimed once again before turning back into her original form:

"Run little Ponies! For the night may have not lasted forever, but the nightMARE is only JUST beginning!!! Hahahahahahahahah!"

She watched everypony fleeing for a moment, then bellowed to a LEAST half of Equestria:

"Good night, sleep tight! You'll be safe from my HORRIFYING nightmares....TONIGHT!!" Mwahaaahahahahahaaaaa! :pinkiecrazy:

The next day, everypony knew that, by their groggy faces, they had stayed up all night trying to battle nightmares - even Luna herself! The Ponyvillians and Princesses then realized that Luna had taken it too far with her alter ego, and that NMMoon might have cast a secret evil spell to take over Equestria. As Luna bolted upright from being asleep in her bed, she realized that NightMare Moon had not been joking - the nightmares were only just beginning... - even if the night wasn't gong to last forever! :pinkiegasp:

Author's Note:

Check the songs out yourself! :)
http://www.azlyrics.com/lyrics/michaeljackson/thriller.html (Song by Michale Jackson)
http://www.azlyrics.com/lyrics/bobbypickett/monstermash.html (Song by Bobby Pickett)

That was the LIGHT part of the story...on to the scary Thiller part! XD I guess this part was a dark COMEDY, but I'll leave the tags I previously put on this story! Thanks for reading! :D

Comments ( 8 )

This looks like this will be a good story. i will keep checking on this.

Hello! I just wanted to say congrats on what looks like the beginning of an interesting story. But, there do seem to be some little issues that I noticed. The formatting is a bit strange and the grammar could use some work; I would suggest an editor. There's a group I can link you to if you're interested!

Secondly, the voice was bit off. It's important to really show what's happening in a story, and choose a perspective. I'm sure if you can talk to more professional fanfic authors, you can get a better understanding of this.

Thirdly, over half of the story was a song. That doesn't really add to the plot, especially when the first chapter is so short to begin with. Try to pace yourself, and perhaps hire a proofreader.

Regardless, I will give this an upvote. Just keep trying! Feel free to PM me for questions, of check out my page:twilightsmile:

~Harmony Pie

7581561 Thank you very much! I'll add more story to the next chapter! Could you link me the editor group? :D

The chapter has been updated a little more; the next and final one is coming soon! :)

Wait, what tag would jest the first chapter ( The Monster Mash and Thriller Night! ) have ?

7784470 Comedy lol, but I don't know what tag to replace it with!

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