Rainbow Dash and Fluttershy are at long last married. Now on their honeymoon, their perfect day gets turned upside down when Dash has a ego induced accident.
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lillytheomegawolf
I enjoy reading and writing cute ponies. If my works brighten up your day, even better.
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More!!! Please!!!
7552732 Absolutely Ive put a lot of work into this story
Glad you enjoyed.
7552854 Cant wait
Well, nice to see you're back. And your story is very intriguing. I do hope that whatever happened, it won't have permanent effects on the pair. Also, since you haven't watched the past two seasons, it's actually quite amusing and coincidental that you say Rainbow is a Wonderbolt, because she finally became one this season. Also, we FlutterDash shippers have discovered that Rainbow will end up with a very annoying in-law if she and Fluttershy really do marry.
Oh, and you should checkout the episode called 'Buckball Season'. I believe it brings out lots of possibilities for FD stories.
7553637 Lol. Annoying in-law would give an interesting tale for the return. Although I'm probably only going to go with my original plan for this story and have it at two chapters total.
Theres a few MLP episodes I should see... but if I do start watching any again, I'll be sure to check Bukball out
Its been a while since I read a lot of your stories, but that was completely adorable and its been a while since I read a Flutterdash story- not that I don't want to but they all feel similar- focus on the journey to getting as a couple. Having a Flutterdash story where the two of them are married and being cute and adorable towards one another and yet they are still the ponies we love to see- that's not as common in my experience.
And you write cute romance scenes really well and that's just a nice thing to see again. A cute, fluffy story that also had some nice character moments and a great hook for more.
“Dash… Why are we here?”
“What?” The Wonderbolt jerked, then gazed into the captivating aqua orbs in front of her. “I dunno… I mean… isn't’ that kinda one of the big questions that ponies have been asking across the ages?”
Fluttershy giggled lightly at her wife’s response, smiling up at her world. “No silly… I mean why are we here… on this mountain."
Was this kinda like a Red vs. Blue reference, it felt very much like the Why Are We Here question in that.
7559886 Yay, someone got the reference
7553910 Thats why I don't really write stories of how they get together. Theres always an oversaturation of such works...
And thanks. its good to know the story is succeeding where in what I was aiming for
Kudos on finally finishing this :P Nice to read another of your works, which this one by the way was a good read. Too bad I don't have a story of my own to share too yet XD... perhaps... another month or two... or more
7564225 Lol. December Im aiming to get chapter two out. Although in the meantime I've got another few releases planned for things like my Alpha and Omega fan fictions and Zootopia.
Great to know you like the story
Hi, Really like the story. Any time frame on the next chapter?
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Well I would like to release it sometime in July as I'm a good way through writing the caves scene. But it depends on how well editing goes with a feature film I'm lead editor for. The film industry has some crazy deadlines... trying to writing several stories at once doesn't help either
but we'll get there as I'm defiantly working to finish this one.
And thanks of the follow
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You're welcome. I've been a fan of your works for some time and I'd say you deserve the follow.
Thanks for the update too.