Rainbow Dash, the greatest flier in all of Equestria and the Element of Loyalty, has had only one dream her entire life: to join The Wonderbolts. What Dash doesn't realize is that doing this would ultimately mean giving up her friends. In fact, she never even gave it a thought until a pegasus named Sound Cloud arrives in Ponyville looking for her. This pony is shrouded with secrets- what could this pegasus want with Rainbow Dash? More importantly, when the time comes for Dash to make her decision, what will she choose: dreams, or loyalty?
Chapters (2)
this sounds good
:)
cant wait for more
Finaly!!!! Oh it is romance!
811997 Glad to here you like it! I intend to wrap up chapter 2 today, if not tomorrow. Of course the editing might take a while but I might just upload it even if isn't perfected like the first chapter was. So yeah stay tuned. ;)
812041 Yeah, yeah, I decided to label it as that but I don't think I am going to focus to heavily on it. Who knows though? You'll just have to wait and see.
814232 A yes, Lynked is a great friend of mine and I am glad you think that way of me. I am also very glad you enjoyed my story and yes I plan to get my flank into high gear and get these chapters out at a steady rate. So yeah stay tuned! (God I say that too much).
814268 Hey every little bit counts, and I would greatly appreciate that, so thank you!
813674
Yeah, tahts what im gonna do too (hint hint)
814268>>814296 Ha! Hello you two!
Anyway, I like it. It's an interesting premiss, and it's fairly well written
I'll keep my eye on it, but so far, I think I can expect something big.
My only little quirk is that you did this >> "Guess I overslept a bit, again." She murmured, scratching the back of her head.
The dialogue is decent though
All in all, you've earned my vote.
Y'know what, I liked this story! And it's only on chapter 1! Something about it just told me to keep reading so I did. Very good so far. I look forward to more to which I can critique at a later time.
838044 Wow, gee I don't know what to say.
Thank you for the compliment and I am happy to hear that you liked the first chapter, I am open to critiques so when you find something don't be afraid to address it.
Dang and I thought it was nearly flawless considering the amount of time that it took for me to complete this first chapter. In regards to the romance it will be light since it is not the main focus of the story, I do hope you will continue reading it though. Overall I guess this means I will have to work even harder on finishing the second chapter done. So much too do so little time.
838962 Glad to hear you like it! Really? You found a few grammar mistakes?
845983 Thank you, because of all the positive feedback I will try much harder to get the next chapter out. It might not be as perfect with grammar and such since I personally think it took a little too long to get one chapter done so I think I will get most of the obvious errors out of the way, release the chapter, and take care of the details at a later time.
You have captured my attention. Wonderful first chapter. Gives me relief from the dark series I'm working on. Depressing work at times. Have a thumb and fave from me. I yearn for more.
910102 *Rainbow Dash OMG* thank you so much!
I am glad it helped relieve you from your series, I can only imagine how hard and depressing it must be to write that. I loved your recent story so very much that like I said I will be sure to review it in my upcoming YouTube series. I am actually going to put a blog up about it later today so keep your eyes pealed for that if you want to know more. Man my birthday keeps getting better and better. 
Thank you again and keep writing those great stories, now I have an obligation to finish chapter two ASAP! 