Something new lurks in the shadows. Something feeding off the fear. And while it sure helped one pony to ressurect himself, it's still a threat to whole ponykind. There will be hard decisions to make, unlikely alliances to keep and impossible goals to achieve. All of that in the name of living through another day.
After all, we should only fear unknown, right?
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Looking forward to the next chapter.
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Thank you :) Will try to not disappoint you :)
Great story. Perfect start. I can not wait for the next part. When you can write the next chapter
7832568 Thank you :)
About the new chapter, i think it will be done this week
right after i will get rid of this massive hangover.Looking forward to the next chapter.
Hahahah. Great CHAPTER. This is great. Really great. Funny and dark, mysterious and clear,. I have read many stories of King Sombre but this is extremely good. Or a great start and then can screw up. The next chapter in the next week or month?
Ps. I understand your pain. I also wrote stories with the king sombre in English and it is not my native language so it is hard to correct mistakes. And what it has to mean ,,I will pay you back in kind."
7858715 Thank you for the praise and i hope this won't end up as a screw up as well :P For the first question, I hope to write it in max 2 weeks. As for the second one, well, probably a non-lethal prank, but this is King Sombra we're talking about, sooooooo...
Still I do not understand what you mean, but you are the author. I hope that there will be no romance but if I am rather Luna / NightMareMoonXKingSombra in my opinion this is the most logical because both of them were angry and imprisoned for a thousand years-a common theme - shadow and night are connected - the night is a shadow of the earth on which shines moon and stars, and therefore is not totally evil - and it is nice to him so far. The best in this story are the jokes and funny behavior of the king sombry what annoys a princess Celestia. I hope that as you get Twilit Princess Sparkle and her friends to King Sombra will be scary and funny
7860079 Well, i can't just sell off all the jokes on the start, right? You will understand it later, i promise :D As for later, I don't think i will insert a romance in it, but if i do, i won't make it the main part of a plot. It would ruin the whole story in my opinion.
Where is new Chapter. We wait six weeks. That's a lot of time to write at least one chapter
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Yeah, i know, and i am sorry for that. I am currently working on it, but for the last 6 weeks, i had tons of problems, including studies and financial problems. I am half way through and should be done in few more days.
Jesus, i suck. I was procrastinating and lazing around for about a month. The writer kind of artblock wasn't helping either. Currently editting and spellchecking, should be done by tomorrow.
So god damn sorry. Hope the chapter will be good enough for you guys, coz in middle of making it i scrapped it and wrote from the start.
Took me long enough, eh? Well, here i am, back on a roll with a fresh, new, several times scrapped and written anew chapter! With a whole story in mind and no idea how to make it even more funny and interesting! But hell, gonna roll with it, if i had to quote the main character :D
I hope you will like the chapter and hell, i even might start to need editors when i finally write chapters at least 8k words long.
As always, sorry for sucking so much.
Crusty King
Another great chapter. I really missed this awesome combination, sociopathic lunatic with funny jokes and terrific/genius dark lord. Only one question: WHEN NEW CHAPTER
You my good sir have my attention. I hope to see more.
First of all:
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thank you for the kind words :)
as when the chapter shall be done, i am already working on it (coz i was being plain lazy for few months, blame blizzard and their great updates).
The meeting with the Biggest Friendship Nerd in Equestria is coming soon.
Back again. At least all it took for me was one month since a last comment. Anyway, back to the news:
NEW CHAPTER IS OUT AND READY FOR READING!
Hope you like it!
All I can say is I’m loving the banter between Sombra and Celestia. Like two siblings. I must say I love this version of Sombra. Witty, full of himself , and just the right side of loveable jerk.
And before you ask yes I have a twisted sense of humor but hey changelings man.
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Wait till the journey starts. Oh god, i have so many ideas.
Well, this is quite a promising, albeit rather fast-paced beginning. Still, you have piqued my interest
Also, noticed a few errors and the like. Do you want me to report them to you via PMs? And despite this story seems to be a bit old, I hope it is not dead yet.
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Not dead, just a bit on the backburner as i still gotta watch all the episodes since the beginning of season 5. Also, i would be delighted for the help, as i am quite aware my english and writing tend to have some errors and such.
Also, thank you for the kind words!
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Ah, I understand. That’s quite a load to go through indeed. Well, if you’d like some more long-term editing help once you have more time to work on the story, I think I can offer my help in this regard (can also provide references and the like if needed).
Aaand, you are welcome!