This is my first story so give constructive criticism and enjoy some alternative universe fluttercord!
Pretty much this is about, What if Fluttershy talked to Discord before she was Discorded?
So I shall sprout upon that question! I may also change the different categories, because honestly, I don't know what it will be.
So the basic prologue of the story, is we are in a time frame, of where the mane six have defeated all the villains, except the season six finale. So no tea parties, or letters, (Sorry Fluttershy) at this point.
Chapters (9)
I'm somewhat curious. The story is pretty decent, just keep writing and see where you end up.
Hmm, you have a few run-on sentences. A problem that I have too. Also grammar like capital letters being in the wrong place. However, I do see potential in this story and it was interesting to read.
AWW! Please make more!
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thank you for replying! Yes I will make more, but maybe not today, it was very busy. Maybe tomorrow I will have more time, so, until next time, bye!
Well this is certainly getting interesting
Why thank you!
I may have to bump it up to teen rating for the chapters ahead... Also, I don't think alcoholic is kid friendly.
More dude!
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Don't worry, I will. I am currently working on another story, you can go check that one out too! It's called happy hearth's warming.
hey you need a romance tag by the way...
This sounds really good.
OMG, nice chapter! I waited for so long! And also, DISCORD
YOU HAVE TO DATE FLUTTERSHY! NO SITES! JUST YOUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUuuu
Discord....no dating sites. Why are all these fun reads leaving me on cliff hangers?
well I love it anyway. I'd rather have quality reads over quantity. Thanks for writing and looking forward to more of you work. 
DISCORD, NO!!!
A wonderfully written story with a cliffhanger having me want to beg for more chapters. I do feel that I am not as appreciative of this story as I could be. This is due to the fact that your story was read sometime before 12pm and ended at 12:40... Why I think the best time to read is when I want to fall asleep, I will never know.
Anyway, thank you for producing a wonder work of art known as your story.
Will this be continueing? if so do you know when you will post the next chapter?