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Set after "28 Pranks Later"

Rainbow Dash did it again, she took her pranking antics too far. Fluttershy has had enough and arranges for another one of their "appointments" together for Rainbow to learn her lesson. Unfortunately for Rainbow Dash, this often leaves her with a sore backside.

Contains: Spanking, Discipline

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Comments ( 8 )

Yes, Mare-Do-Well was uncalled for. Granted it kinda worked, but they were still being pass-agg cunts about it.

It took me a while to actually understand what Fluttershy was doing. I understand completely, but why a brush?:yay:

Rainbow Dash grumbled and sat up, waiting for Fluttershy to sit on the couch. With grace that no pony could match, Fluttershy took her seat. Rainbow Dash flopped on her belly over her friend’s lap with her flank in the air as she brushed her tail out of the way.

Eeyup. Saw this coming from the very first sentence.

“Well in my defense Mare-Do-Well was kinda your guys’ fault…”

Really, Rainbow Dash?? I mean, really??

“Rainbow Dash, I’m afraid you’re not understanding the reason behind all of this.” Fluttershy tone grew sharp as Rainbow Dash gasped for air.

Yeah...I'll say! Sheesh.

Once Rainbow Dash could draw in a breath she stammered. “I-it’s to learn a…lesson.” Rainbow Dash inhaled tersely as she regained her ability to breathe again.

Yep. Got it in one, Dash!

Fluttershy nodded. “Exactly, and since our friends’ methods don’t seem to stick well, I’ve been forced to use the same method that was used on you as a filly. You remember don’t you?”

All I'm gonna say is OW!

And this continued again, and again, until Rainbow Dash was trembling. When she was done Fluttershy set the mane brush on the coffee table next to her Home and Hearth magazines. The shy mare collected the sniffling, headstrong speedster and held her close in a hug. Tears tugged at the corners of Fluttershy’s eyes. “Please Rainbow Dash. I don’t want to have to keep doing this but I want you to understand how your actions can hurt other ponies.”

Wow...Fluttershy reminds me of my mother...

The cerulean mare nodded her head furiously. “I’m sorry Flutters.” She choked out, her voice cracking as she returned the hug with a small smile. She began to regain her composure, “But I was totally serious about the Mare-Do-Well thing…”

Nice, Dash. I sense another spanking coming your way for that. Geez.

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Well, MDW WAS uncalled for... especially since they went straight for that option instead of talking with her.

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Literally everyone forgets about Mare Do Well's first time on screen.

(I mean even I blocked it out of my memory and I was never really a Rainbow Dash fan, it's just that bad).
Could they have done better? Probably. Did they do good though over the course of their run? Definitely.

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They could have done better if they ditched the costume altogether. All they had to do was do their heroic deeds without being egotistical and it would have gotten the message across. Not to mention the fact that even if Rainbow didn't gloat they still would have had to step in anyway considering the fact that most of the disasters within she was unable to handle allone.

The runaway cart? She tried to stop it and failed, only AJ had enough strength to stop it so she would have had to step in any way.

The construction site? Even she couldn't save all the workers Utah all the debris falling and getting in the way. So Pinkie Pie would have had to jump in and help anyway.

The dam? If simply leaning on it a little resulted in it breaking, then it was going to collapse even if RD didn't touch it. Twilight would have had to have stepped in anyway.

See what I'm getting at?

In other words, the whole MDW get up was 100% pointless.

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All they had to do was do their heroic deeds without being egotistical and it would have gotten the message across.

You'll get no argument from me. But that falls into that "they could've done better" category that I mentioned.

In other words, the whole MDW get up was 100% pointless.

Except to get under Rainbow's skin. But like I said they proberbly could've done better.

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