You Do Not need to know the Undertale Franchise to read this.
"You think there are no consequences, don't you?"
"You just do what you want, kill whoever you want."
"Why? Why did you kill her?"
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*megalunavia intensities*
This is really nice! I'd honestly never really thought of putting these characters into the roles of Sans and Papyrus, but it works! Nicely done, good writer! Nicely done.
I don't play undertale so i really don't understand this story.
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oh....what do you not get?
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Fluttershy is evil, basically. not much more to it.
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Now it makes a little more sense. Thanks.
The writing is good, but it feels like there could have been more done with this. Also, tag overload, dude. Do you really need Drama AND Sad AND Tragedy AND Dark?
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Gotta be prepared
One day...We'll run outta tags...and we have to be prepared...tag...over...load
*deds*
I'll get rid of 'drama', cause it doesn't really belong there.
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I think you can probably also cut Crossover, since no actual characters or elements from the game appear, but that's just me.
Another ponification -_-. Might as well read for shits and giggles.
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I didn't want to rip off the game's lines
Luna: It's a beautiful day outside...birds are singing, flowers are blooming...on days like these, fillies like you...SHOULD BE BURNING IN HELL
Sans was able to tell you had loaded by reading your expression, which is an incredible feat of perception. But his consciousness did not travel back in time, he lost all memories just like (almost) everyone else.
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Those are theories, who knows what actually happens?!?! Maybe he can remember, maybe he's good at reading facial expressions, I frankly don't think it matters.
Wow! I like the adaptation!!
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Thank you!
What shall we name this AU? Ponyshift? No... Swift-i-cide? No.... TERRAFORMED!! Oh, wait... that's already a thing.... Give me somethin', people~!
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I think Ponytale's been taken, so I call it Murder is Magic.
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I AM INSPIRED!!!!!
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That's exactly what I love to hear! Go do something about it, child! Life is not gonna wait for you! GO BE INSPIRED AND MAKE OTHERS INSPIRED, TOO!
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I WILL!! I WILL MAKE A DIFFERENCE AND INSPIRE OTHERS!!
Either way, still a great story!
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I BELIEVE IN YOU