• Member Since 17th May, 2012
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Mr Unsmiley

Writing the stories you didn't know you wanted. I think.

Comments ( 43 )

Good job, nice story, but......now I have a boner................

good fic though. :eeyup:

i'm rather sensitive on matters concerning Fluttershy and clop, but this was well written, so it's ok... i guess...

It's good enough for a one-shot. Although I feel that there wasn't enough context.

Made me giggle.
Okay, I actually laughed.

810330 Did you read the story before it?

No, perhaps that is why then. I take back my previous comment untill I can at least read the prequal.

I still think it 'dived in at the deep end' somewhat though.


......XD i liked it

Well....enjoyed the read...now I just need to wait for my boner ti go away...very good story btw


Bwahahahahah!:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh: Oh sweet Celestia I love the use of Assertiveshy in the end. It was the best ever! Ha! Gotta see more of this, please dont make me beg!:raritycry:

Son of a bucking mare. Too short. MOAR. NAO. But in all seriousness, excellent sequel. Now write part three.:rainbowkiss:

I LOVE that Rainbow Dash calls her own name. That's the cherry on top.:rainbowlaugh:

wat. when i reached near end i thought oh my THERES A SQUEAL but then read the last line and oh... no squeal

funny as hell, and good clop material (even though i dont normally read this stuff)

818472 I need to...I wouldn't care walking around and all like that but...there's more than me in this house and they don't wanna se that..

Then don't read Clop when around other people? :trixieshiftright:


And while we're at it, AppleSparkleDash.

Preferably with at least one magic penis.

824424 I don't care what others think...the whole point of this was to say that I like your story alot....

829478 Sorry, but it's going to take a while to write out my new stories, and they're not really one of the planned couples. Up next is (hopefully) a multific story based on the last two one-shots, and another oneshot with Luna and Pipsqueak, non-humanized.

That was awesome! :rainbowlaugh:

.... me gusta :ajbemused:



I just read this on my phone at churche. Forgive me father, for I have sinned.

Rainbow Dash turned to her as she watched her sore-legged friend huff and puff her way to the car. “Well, are they coming?”
Rarity turned on her heels and growled, “Not. Yet.”

Ha I see what you did there. Brilliant. Now to read the sequel.:rainbowkiss:

809574 he cant handle, all his boners

:applecry: fluttershy?
i still can't help but to love the story tho

I want part three NAOOOOOO! :pinkiehappy:

"You talk on the phone, I make you moan!" :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

All in all, very hot. Loved it. It could use a third part.

This story is so ridiculous, but my god, was it ever funny. Not many fics have made me laugh as much as this one did. Absolutely hilarious :yay:

2156131 It's Man About Town, my other story.

Iron Will as a sex coach. 100 percent satisfation, or he'll do it himself.

"Well…” Fluttershy looked up as Pinkie Pie slinked away, her normally poofy hair turning itself into sophisticated curls not unlike Rarity’s own. “I would tell you that you need to try harder, because this Pinkie isn’t easy as Pie!”

"this pinkie isn't easy as pie" that's what you went with? YOU SIR/MA'AM, ARE A GODDAMN GENIOUS! And I don't say THAT a lot. :pinkiehappy:

To quote DawnFade


Hot and funny!!!! Perfect combination :pinkiehappy:

.......Good lord your good at making people laugh their ass off

legged friend huff and puff her way to the car. “Well, are they coming?”
Rarity turned on her heels and growled, “Not. Yet.

Actually, she just did.

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