I just started writing fan fics on my little pony since October and I hope the stories I do are good enough for everypony
Applebloom is now a full grown mare but is still being bossed around by her sister.
After she has a major fight with Applejack, Applebloom runs away.
Two weeks later everything is different and pain and regrets take over the poor mare,
what will happen now since she's lost everything.
-NOTE-
This is a pre version of a story I read a while ago unfortunately I can't remember the name of it.
I hope you all enjoy and don't be afraid to show some tears.
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Well, I just finished reading, over all, it's quite good. The only thing I thought that was lacking, was description. It felt a bit hollow due to the majority of the chapter being dialogue. Other than that, I found no grammatical errors, it has a solid backround, and the characters are well done. I'd be willing to help with things such as description and the like, it's up to you.
Have an internet muffin.
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930499 I would really appreciate your help if your up to it. I am looking for people to help with my stories since I do have a hard time thinking up ideas my own, I'm not saying that your writing the ideas as my slave, I'm just saying that I think it would be great to have a writing companion alongside me. That is if your okay with it.
959081 I'd love to help bro, you got skype?
959093 Unfortunately no but I do have a Deviant Art account you can send me messages through my note pad there or you can Email me at Danielps@live.ca. I am always on those two sites so I will check there.
959102 Lawl then I'll just message you on here instead, it's easier. Just message me what you want me to do.
959109 Okay thanks.