Jacob Cooper doesn't want to fight. He never did, but when technology is discovered that allows travel to different star systems, every major country on Earth is determined to snag anything valuable in the cosmos. The countries can't ever come to a compromise, which eventually leads to an all-out war.
America, your home country, eventually gets involved; however they won't accept defeat, and make the decision to start the draft. As luck would have it, you are selected, and are instantly deployed with an unit. When your unit is travelling to their destination, an abnormal black hole appears and shreds your ship to scrap. Fortunately for you, you wake just at the right time.
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Author's Note
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Hey all, this is my first story, and I really hope you enjoy it, as I plan to enjoy writing it. Please don't expect too much from this, as it is my first time. If you have any advice, please feel free to share it!
Cool keep it going.
I like it. And it takes a lot to impress me with a human in Equestria story. Keep up the good work!
7514806 If you enjoy this chapter, I think you'll like the upcoming ones as well. This chapter was more or less just shaking off the dust.
I can't really complain to much about the Human not being able to defend himself right now, but maybe Rainbow had it a bit to easy with the Timberwoles. I expected her to flee after taking out the first few wolves, but in a longer fight I would expect her to accidently get caught by them.
I mean yes she is fast, but probably only that agile with her body.
I hope he has something on his own to make himself look more special, otherwise I'm happy with the first chapter.
This is a little bit better, it is nice to know that she seems to have her speeds and muscle, and he is more the smart fighter. I believe I read it somewhere that Humans are more or less more dangerous if they have their weapons, but without them they could only do so much.
However I like it that he already had stuff that she liked to and...you probably know what I mean already.
I'm impressed, you didn't made her force clothes onto him.
I like it, Rarity didn't forced the matter with the clothes, and so far I like Rainbows reactions to everything.
I know it it wouldn't be to bad otherwise, but I hope that the Human really has his technology stuff to actually look important too, and isn't only going to look depending on everyone else in every possible situation.
I mean that he maybe can help himself in dangerous situations in the future, with his own weapons. I know that there are story versions where the Ponys actually work more like cartoon characters are supposed to work, then there are Pony versions where their bodies can get hurt easier.
I guess as strong as they may really be, I would like it to see, that he can manage to draw level with the more normal ponys.
I would understand if he couldn't exactly be as strong as the Alicorns, but I would not like him defenseless everytime, or so much worse than every pony.
I'm kinda confused as to how this counts as a Displaced story....
Well, I'm interested to say the least, but I'm honestly confused as to how this counts as a Displaced fic...
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Displace- Force (someone) to leave their home, typically because of war, persecution, ornatural disaster.Scratch that, just read the essay of rules required to post there. Would rather write my own story than be bound to that.
Very interesting story, I am looking forward to continuing and more. Good job👍👌