Babs Seed with a Buggy Twist

MyEvilPony

MyEvilPony #1 · Aug 27th, 2016 · 4 · ·

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This needs a sequel. Great work.

Mr Ghostman

Mr Ghostman #2 · Aug 27th, 2016 · 2 · ·

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I'm so glad that Twist is getting some more love. Especially from Changelings. Good job on this!

MercifulOmega

MercifulOmega #3 · Aug 28th, 2016 · 3 · ·

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I don't know what is worse. The fact this was written. The fact I read it. Or the fact I enjoyed it.

TheOneWithoutAName

TheOneWithoutAName #4 · Aug 28th, 2016 · · ·

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I'm glad you like it! But a sequel will only be written if I or some other has a nice idea about it that I like. So, you could make suggestions if you want.

7515780

I'm glad you like it! Even though it might not be 100% the way you imagined it, considering the focus was more on Babs Seed, but then again she was introduced to a changeling gangbang, which automatically makes her the protagonist in a way.

7517592

Well...I'm glad you liked it...too? Even though I'm a bit confused from the way you formulated it. What do you think is negative? The characters? I kind of see from the few views as well as the opinion of a fellow writer that they are not all that popular.

Hopeful_Ink_Hoof

Hopeful_Ink_Hoof #5 · Aug 28th, 2016 · 2 · ·

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I'm sorry, but with the whole "glowing dick" thing, I just keep picturing it showing through their throats and stomachs.

It's kind of funny and decent clop. It is kind of nice to see Twist in another story as well. I'm kind of curious about that previous experience they shared though. There is one typo that sticks out: you accidentally call Babs "Barb" at one point:

Barb could only look on in awe at this spectacle that unfolded in front of her.

Also, for future reference, Babs, get him in an oral position. Then remind him you have teeth wrapped around a very sensitive part of his anatomy.

TheOneWithoutAName

TheOneWithoutAName #6 · Aug 28th, 2016 · 1 · ·

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I'm sorry, but with the whole "glowing dick" thing, I just keep picturing it showing through their throats and stomachs.

You know what? I might even add that! Glowing Flashlight Dicks FTW!

Also, for future reference, Babs, get him in an oral position. Then remind him you have teeth wrapped around a very sensitive part of his anatomy.

She could do that! Loved to write Babs and the changeling Stuart! It's kind of a small tsundere romance between them, and such are always fun!

Ekhidna

Ekhidna #7 · Aug 28th, 2016 · 2 · ·

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I couldn't help but smile the entire way through it. All thanks to glowing dicks.

TheOneWithoutAName

TheOneWithoutAName #8 · Aug 28th, 2016 · · ·

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I'm currently trying to spread 'Flashlight Cocks' as a new fetish! Already made a blog post and opened a thread here!

Let's all spread the wonders of 'Flashlight Cocks'!

Mr Ghostman

Mr Ghostman #9 · Aug 28th, 2016 · 1 · ·

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I know but still it's nice to see Twist get in on the action too considering her adorkable personality is just so precious.

SWEETOLEBOB18

SWEETOLEBOB18 #10 · Aug 30th, 2016 · 1 · ·

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The thing to remember about Changelings is that they can read emotions. Thus, they know what you like even without being told.

Also, as shapeshifters they can be any gender you like.

PoniesAreSoAwesome

PoniesAreSoAwesome #11 · Jan 12th, 2017 · 3 · ·

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I've read this story several times, and I just now realized the changelings are named after the Minions from Despicable Me: Kevin, Stuart, and Bob.

TheOneWithoutAName

TheOneWithoutAName #12 · Jan 13th, 2017 · 1 · ·

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You are the first to notice this! Or the first who noticed and commented on it? In any case glad someone saw that. I thought it would be sooner since I hinted at a reference with these names in the Author's Note. But then again this story is not as well-read as some of my others because of the characters.

Anyway, I just couldn't resist. The requester wanted a Kevin and the situation was simply too good to pass up!

DracoBrony