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BombShelter


If you're looking for sarcastic humor, you've come to the right place!

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A human, you, stranded in a strange world for months on end. You are the wanderer, simply living day to day, doing whatever you please.

One fateful night, you stumble across a small town. Tired and saddened by recent events, you decide to sit and take a rest. Little do you know, you're about to meet someone much different than other's you've met before.

+[A Multi-Chaptered Short Story]+

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 29 )

Good story so far. I like to see of what'll be happening next. :pinkiesmile:

Hurrah! :yay: Another Human x RD story posted by you. :raritywink:

Though I do wonder who that guy that Dashie mentions is.

WAIT!
The Bartender said "Mrs. Dash" as in 'Missis Dash?'
I better go on Amazon and search up 'Mrs. Dash' and check how much they charge for SHIPPING!["Far, far away. Another world entirely..."] *Insert Star Wars joke here*
["That's be loitering.] This vocabulary sounds like that one guy from Family Guy.
All jokes aside this was great and I hope your doing well! :yay:

Always Love Your Writing Keep Up The Good Work:pinkiehappy:

A perfect blend of sadness and happines

This looks great so far. Update soon please!

Comment posted by BombShelter deleted Aug 23rd, 2016

So far, so good. Looking forward to the next chapter.

JBL

Learn the difference between you're and your.

I'm liking it so far, hope you delve into the sad category a little more as the story goes on. Keep going!

OMFG! Right when Guy got all the emotional thoughts about him and Rainbow I knew he would say "hope", I F***ing knew it.
I now claim a new ability of mine called..... The Dimsum Sense! :pinkiecrazy:
Great chapter! I look forward to seeing Ponyville react to a Hairless Harambe!

Looking good. Still keeping it on my motion tracker.

I like the story. The plot is solid, although there are many stories of "humans in equestria" this one is different in the sense that Guy actually struggles and isn't just taken in and everyone's living happily ever after. I also appreciate the grammar here, I counted two errors at the most and I am very grateful for that. Keep up the good work, I look forward to reading your next one.

Comment posted by RagingCacti deleted Jan 16th, 2017

Awww! That's so sweet!:yay: *Insert quote from Steven Magnet here*
As Guy was hammering away I could emagine him hitting his hand and saying "DOH!"

That Was Really Good I Always Love Your Stories :pinkiesmile:

As soon as I finished reading this all I could hear in my mind was hopes and dreams theme from you guessed it Undertale

Well, I can say that the next chapter is where Rainbow begins falling in love with Guy.

Though I do wish to read on how Rainbow's friends react to meeting Guy, otherwise, you still have my attention.

7513686 Well, Ive already set this story complete because... It is. But I could always make a seqeul. ;)

7513694 Well, can you be able too? I want the plot to continue, Please.

EDIT: Please don't hate me, but I might have to take this off of my favorites until the second story comes out. I'm sorry dude. But I'm still keeping the thumbs up I gave on there.

I third that guy not me too :pinkiesad2:

I really liked the end! So adorable!

I though this was gonna end with a kiss or something romantic.

I need a sequel. Please?

very nice story, I'm waiting for more similar, good job:yay:

That was great :heart:

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