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Themexininja
Some guy on a rock floating through space.
Themexininja
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I see the hellsing ultimate abridged reference in the synopsis
7523070 Had to make it kind of obvious for fans to find
An awesome beginning, keep it up and you get a rating of GIGANTIC BALLS/10
7535030 Thank you friend! Always nice to hear some input in what I do.
a really cool story, i like it so far keep it up
That one is new to me haha
7613755 thank you for the compliment, may I ask what caught your interest with this story? And I do apologize for the lack of updates. I just got some shit going on that I need to deal with first.
7613844 well I personally I like that kind of story where someone is lost in a new world and they have to find out the how and where or when they are. It is always fun. And what is special in your story I have to say is the "colorful" language they have, if you know what I mean. I like the main characters Ash and Erik, the way they comunicate with each other really make my atach to them, like they are really true people that I can meet somewhere near my neighborhood, and that makes me to know what is going to happem with them. But I have to say, I didnt enjoy that much the 3th chapter, I think it want a little fast. I mean Celestia just find out about these humans and there home in the forest, then all of the sudden she know that they can't come back to home and the main characters are like "o well thats an inconvenience". I dont know, I just think that that kind of news should be more dramatic.and not only that, Celestia then offer them money for there family after, again all of the sudden, she know a way of send them back to there world. Sorry but that's what I think, but may be all that can be explain in latter chapters, I dont know, is bad to say things like that when the story is not even done yet.
And sorry for the long coment XP, i get a little carried away.
7614552 Yeah that third chapter was a little meh in my opinion, but iv'e gone back and re-read it plenty of times and I just cant seem to make it... "flow better"? all you need to know is Celestia has her motives and we just gotta see if our duo will fall into her plans.
it's about time, i had to re-read all the others chapters because I miss a thing or two but it was a fun reading
o and
es Necesito y contigo
7974167 ah thanks for that, I was never formally taught spanish so I may be a little retarded with its spelling. I will correct it when I get to a computer.
Also, yeah I know but shit happens, am I right?