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Rarity's father wishes for her to marry a nobledragon for an aliance but she wishes to marry another for love, all the while the dragon's best friend is pinning for him!
What will happen when they all find themselves venturing into the Everfree forest one midsummer night? Things are about to become very confusing, especially when a fun-loving fairy gets involved!

Based on William Shakespear's A Midsummer Night's Dream

Chapters (6)
Comments ( 13 )

It's been a long while since I read any of Shakespeare's works but this looks very good for a start. Looking forward to reading your take on this classic!

Cool! I like how you still got the basic gist of the original dialogue but modernized it, and it's not just a copy/paste of the original text. I like the casting choices so far, not so sure about Dark King Sombra being a tame though still temperamental Lord though, but that's just me.

I would check over your grammar and spelling though. There are also capitalization errors.

Sweet set up! Though with Trixie in the Bottom role...I'm wondering who Titania is going to be. MAN, THAT WILL BE HUMOROUS!

WHOA WHOA WHAT?! FLUTTERSHY'S PREGNANT?! That's something that wasn't in the original play. Anyway, yay! I'm glad Discord and Fluttershy are the King and Queen! I thought Pinkie was going to be Puck but Cheese is the next best thing! Also, nice touch making the changeling a changeling (you know what I mean).

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I'm glad you are enjoying the story so far DF :pinkiehappy:

I will be forced to live out the rest of my life in a convict

LOL, I think you mean "convent"

she sadly.

Should probably put a "said" in there.
Also when two ponies speak back and forth, you don't need as many dialogue tags.

I herd things didn't go to well

"heard." A "herd" is like a herd of cows.
But yay, AJ is Helena! (you know very well why I'm happy about this)

7767643 Thanks, errors are now fixed! And yay for Applespike! :moustache::ajsmug:

can't wait to see more

This is interesting. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

can't wait to see more

Yeah, I was gonna say how's he gonna mix a dragon and a stallion up?

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