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This story is a sequel to Wondercolts Adventures: Beautiful
Sugarcoat has been monitoring the human world's Sunset Shimmer for a while now, and she has finally found an avenue in which to learn more about her. But in order to take advantage of it, she may have to become something she doesn't want to be.
Whatever path she chooses, will she end up plunging in way over her head?
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I think it is safe to say you are my fav writer on this site dragon. Keep up the good work
Well, they seem to have at least one hobby in common:
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Damn, I'm Sugarcoat. Once Indigo mentioned clubbing, I immediately thought of baby seals.
Revenge of the baby seals. Remember, you started it.
Flash, don't do that. On a side note, my first thought when he mentioned the guitar was "he's really desperate" and then Sugarcoat said just that (as a guitar player myself: you don't say you play guitar, unless you just happen to have one with you).
Well, I guess the sounds of bodily functions would be more unpleasant in such a situation (weird that someone soundproofs the karaoke, but doesn't do the same with the toilets, though). Also, now I wonder if they have fight club in there.
Call the agents! She knows!
On a side note, while Zecora indeed rhymes here, she does not always fit the rhythm. Like, "Your mind is as sharp as your tongue is quick, but I assure you that while most of this is fashion quite slick" the first part has 10 syllables, but the second has 15, so it kinda falls on its face, figuratively speaking.
Not like there's a lot to ramble about...
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Well, when you choose whether or not to have a heart surgery...
Well, you danced, you gave her your phone number... No wonder Indigo is making assumptions.
Then Indigo buys Sugarcoat a Mythbusters "I reject your reality and substitute it with my own" t-shirt.
Also, now I'm thinking that Night Glider and human Sunset are in a cult. Maybe because pony Night Glider kinda was in one, but who knows.
Spill the beans Sugarcoat! Be the truthwoman we all once know and love! Your friends safety and security depends on this girl! Dont get eaten by your ego! The truth will prevail, so why bother saving it for later when it would hurt more?
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If Night Glider's talking equality, then that might mean there's a Starlight Glimmer somewhere in her life, helping run the cult.
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I suddenly imagined Starlight as The Leader from 1Q84 by Haruki Murakami.
I knew you were planing something with sugarcoat an love ^^ though lesbian? Maybe I was thrown off for a bit since I never saw that hinted at with sugarcoat (or I may hae missed it) and maybe because I was thinking you wouldn't go the lesbian route wth your fics more than you had to to break the mold. Still, I do like this setup, even if a part of me wished it was a guy (though the bit with flash made me crack up
) I eager to see where this part of your series goes
Is it just me or does this version of Sugarcoat remind me a lot of Benedict Cumberbatch's Sherlock Holmes?
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I was actually thinking the other day that she has slowly morphed into Daria Morgandorfer. But everyone has their own impressions of the characters.
7500480 Wait, who is 'Daria Morgandorfer' exactly?
So. Human!Sunset is linked to Human!Starlight. This can only lead to bad things
I hope she chooses the right choice of not toying with her heart like this.
Starlight as well as Sunset? Hoo boy....
Sugarcoat leading Night Glider on for the greater good (THE GREATER GOOD)? More hoo boy....
Gonna be a long week.
*snrk*
Wow, Sugarcoat's determined to be Boogercoat here.
Like she said.
Wow, Sugarcoat, who poked you in the ass with the bitch stick?
...more than usual I mean.
OK, as much as Flash was being kind of a derp there? Sugarcoat was much harder on him than was really called for.
...so the ship name is Sugar Glider? You son of a bitch.
Uh-oh.
Typo.
...wow, Sugarcoat really did not think any of this through. Talk about massively playing the manipulative bitch card. I feel sorry for Night Glider.
KISS HER!!!
Defining Character moment right now. I can't wait to see what Sugarcoat does.
Hold on to your butts, decision-making time!
Why is zecora on the thumbnail
No wonder Sunset is dedicated to proving herself to Cinch. Cinch is probably the first one to tell her that being ambitious is not a bad thing!
P.S. How do Indigo and Sugarcoat know that Sunset is living with Cinch "off the record"? Sunset is under no obligation to tell any other students where she lives and students are not allowed access to that kind of information because it would constitute a breach of privacy.
*gesturing X marks using both arms*
Sugarcoat, being interested in a new way of life doesnt always means you need to join them. You dont have to be so brutally honest all the time, but you mustnt threw it all away so suddenly as well. There is a balance for Sugarcoat, and I would like to see Sugarcoat's briliance emerged and she choose the best options.
also, I LOVE your intrepertation of Starlight Glimmer! Cant wait to see more of it! I can only visioned Sunburst wallowing in self pity as well, while whisking away his tears with money from his high paying job of course.
It's like the places in Harry Potter. Someone has to show it to you so you start noticing it.
The Little People from 1Q84 gave it to her. Or it's her Tardis.
Even more direct?
I normally don't mind adverbs or telliness, but growling dangerously is kinda pushing it.
I immediately imagined something out of GTA, when she's unable to recognise them because they changed the colour of the car and their hairstyles. Also, dunno about Sunset, but this trick wouldn't work on me. Plates are literally the last thing I look at when seeing a familiar car. The colour and brand are first, then I try to spot if the driver is someone I know.
You could sneak in and get some interesting photos, but it'd burn both the camera and your eyes...
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Well, "not allowed" and "impossible" are two different things. You wouldn't believe how easy is to get information about someone if you know where to look for. Also, maybe the house had something that'd identify the owner, like the name on the mailbox, or a ten-foot statue of Principal Cinch in the garden...
A sympathetic version of Equality Starlight.
Never thought that could actually happen.
Well done, and I mean that. :D
Okay...I'm not as against this Starlight as I am with the c*nt that is Season 5 Starlight.
15 years of Friendship as opposed to 5-6 and (although all we have is her word) her description of being shoved aside seems like it could be far more accurate.
Caring for one another and teamwork is something good to strive for, understanding others is a good thing.
The only problem with her thought process is that she's still demonizing ambition entirely, as if it gives everyone a superiority complex that makes them look down on everyone. The description of Night Glider's appearance makes it clear that she's still basically doing the equality thing (but maybe not to an extreme extent as we saw before, maybe)
Given that she was taught under Cinch however does make this more understandable.
Good job.
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Sorry, I guess I should have been more clear before. My bad. What I meant was that the school would not be allowed to to give them the information that Sunset lives with Cinch. Secret to the students, yes, but not to the faculty.
About the only way for most people to know that Sunset lived there would be to follow her, break into school records or if Cinch or Sunset posted it somewhere anyone can access.
You know, I would find it absolutely hilarious if it turns out that Cinch has nothing to do with the stuff Sunset's doing to them and it's just Sunset acting on her own. This plot element never really made sense to me, so I figure Sunset is doing it for the approval of the only person who supported her.
7572511 What this person said.
In the end, ambition and competition isn't too bad... but it certainly can be if taken too far. And Crystal Prep specializes in cultivating the too far route.
Really giving Sugarcoat a lot of cliffs to hang from.
Looking forward to seeing how Starlight and her work play out in your already complex universe.
...we need to go deeper.
I think that should be four pairs of eyes.
This was by far the best interpretation of Starlight Glimmer's Extreme Socialist views having negative effects on others, like human Sunset (who can't help but have an unquenchable thirst for glory). Great work!
Hopefully EG!Starlight will be more reasonable than her counterpart was and actually consider Sugarcoat's words. Sometimes people just need someone to smack them in the face with a truth hammer.
...And now I want to see a pic of Sugarcoat with a Shao Kahn-style hammer with the word 'TRUTH' written on it.
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.... This was an incredible chapter. I do hope Sugarcoat's words have a positive impact on Starlight there, even if they were hard for her to hear.
Welp, human world Starlight made it to pony Starlight's S5 c**t status.
Story was great!
Wow, Sugarcoat's starting to shake things up. And things managed to end on a pretty hopeful note, for now.
Man, that was a strong story! Totally worth the wait. Keep up the good work with what you have planned next!
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... I think 'people die if they are killed' just got taken to the next level,
She was surprisingly quick to point that out, though. There may be some closet involved. Or at least a swimming pool,
There's that saying around here, that one should never lend anyone their car/motorcycle, wife/husband, or undies (some people, myself included, add guitars to the list). I guess Indigo knows that saying.
Little did she know that the camping trip wound end up with levitating stuff and fighting a slightly lost girl with a vine tentacle fetish. Who, due to a certain dark-skinned, green-haired young gentleman may become her sister-in-law one day.
I guess in case of famous last words, it ranks somewhere around "hold my beer"...
I can see it. My first thought was, "they surely eat people", but I guess I'm just used to the crapsaccharine world trope.
On a side note, when you write someone speaking for multiple paragraph, you only make quotes at the beginning of each paragraph, not at the end (unless it's the last paragraph).
Two theories: Cinch made a deal with Satan, or she's actually from Equestria. Or at least has some contacts in there.
I'm so skewed by my job that my mind immediately went into a tangent, wondering what would those six diseases be (hepatitis B and C, cirrhosis, AIDS, syphilis, and TB. In this case, "gotta catch 'em all" is a bad idea).
And hell, Sugarcoat wins this one. Though I guess it'll take Sunset a while to change her ways.
Best threat ever.
"I have failed you, Sunset, I have failed you." "I hate you!"
I couldn'tnotreference RotSWait, if they are against competition on even the smallest level, how come they have video games? I could understand something like an RPG or Tetris, but something that's played with multiple people?
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Hence why they were passing around one controller and not playing a multiplayer game.
7651224 Ah, good point.
Someone's in danger of drinking the kool-aid.
WHOO. That ending to the chapter.
Everything Zecora said was true.
And now, to see Sugarcoat's choice...
WELL. I certainly didn't see that coming. But I think I know how we got here.
Zecora, you sly dog.
That was both harsh and rude of her.
I did not see that coming.
Something tells me that'll be a pain to get accomplished.
Wait what!?!?!?!? 😨
Well, at least she got some more info on the human sunset shimmer and even starlight glimmer too, even if most of it wasn't great to learn.
Must be starlight glimmer.
Is that supposed to say/mean fuck sunset?
https://m.That's interesting.
Dang, should of guessed sunburst was gonna be mentioned sometime in this story but not like this. 🙁
Must be a lot to take in. 😥
How nice of her.
It was worth a shot.
And that is perfectly ok sunset.
That's what I think about a lot actually.
Oh, that's what she meant by saving her life, hope she's prepared for what's to come. 😬
That's kind rude of her actually to inspect her for weapons, not to mention ever lift her skirt too, which is something even I would never do.
Well you kinda deserved it for what you've done.
That sure does explain many questions I've been having and now they've been answered. 😕
Wow, I can't believe she said that out of the blue! 😨