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This story is a sequel to The Chronicler

"And in the end, the love you take is equal to the love you make."

Paul McCartney

Artifex Frost has officially enrolled in Canterlot High, becoming its newest student. With the usual apprehension and feelings of doubt that come with being the new kid, he will have to contend with the trials of the present, and the repercussions of the past, as he starts his life anew. But he will get by; with the help of those who helped him the day before.

Join Artifex Frost as, with his new friends by his side, he begins to live, learn, and love—day by day, moment by moment.


A PoME Universe story.

Thanks to the following for letting me use their OCs:

BlueSun52

BRyeMC

Azure_Shadow

And thank you to all the writers, members, and readers of the PoME group, who have inspired me in more ways than just one, simple story.

Tags will be added when necessary.

First Published
14th Aug 2016
Last Modified
20th Mar 2017

As I said before, nice start! I can't wait to see what this story turns out to be!

>>7480572 Thanks, man. I hope you enjoy it as it goes on! :pinkiehappy:

Day One was pretty eventful! It's neat to see Artifex's perspective about things change since the prequel story.

Here's hoping the next Day(s) are equally interesting! :)

I'm still questioning why people haven't read this. Maybe because their OC's are not in it?

I mean seriously, this story is outstanding.

>>7541641 Maybe it's because people haven't read the prequel?

This is a review from Twilight's Reviews.

This is actually a nice story, but I'm afraid not the best. I like how you describe each moment and day of his life after the change in his life. I would actually like to put this story in the Great Reads folder. But as this is an incomplete story, chances are that it could make it to the Best Reads folder. But this is it for now.

Day three?? Why, what happened to day two?

>>7559422 From the first chapter's author's note:

Most chapters will be short, to emphasize the "moment-by-moment" feel, but some will be longer when need be. Consequently, some arcs will be multi-chaptered; some, single-chaptered. Some days may even be skipped, and this will be intentional.

There's also the issue of me planning this to be a story that takes place over the course of a school year. If the average school year is about 200+ days, well... I don't want to be caught up being a day-to-day recording. The main theme of the story is that the character of Artifex Frost is learning, growing, or facing something different in mere moments, and those lessons are carried over the previous days. You can omit some details, such as entire day records, and still keep the central theme.

*Constructed generic comment saying chapter was good*

Way to kill the Blueblood mauling Javier :ajbemused:

>>7985165 What? He has the potential not almost not be a dick, just as much as Flash has the potential not to be a boring slate. :raritywink:

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