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Jarvy Jared


In order to learn anything in life, you have to live it yourself.


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This story is a sequel to The Chronicler

"And in the end, the love you take is equal to the love you make."
Paul McCartney

Artifex Frost has officially enrolled in Canterlot High, becoming its newest student. With the usual apprehension and feelings of doubt that come with being the new kid, he will have to contend with the trials of the present, and the repercussions of the past, as he starts his life anew. But he will get by; with the help of those who helped him the day before.

Join Artifex Frost as, with his new friends by his side, he begins to live, learn, and love—day by day, moment by moment.


A PoME Universe story.

Thanks to the following for letting me use their OCs:
BlueSun52
BRyeMC
Azure_Shadow
FrostGuardian
Ragga_Muffin
And thank you to all the writers, members, and readers of the PoME group, who have inspired me in more ways than just one, simple story.

Tags will be added when necessary.

Chapters (42)
Comments ( 22 )

As I said before, nice start! I can't wait to see what this story turns out to be!

7480572 Thanks, man. I hope you enjoy it as it goes on! :pinkiehappy:

Day One was pretty eventful! It's neat to see Artifex's perspective about things change since the prequel story.

Here's hoping the next Day(s) are equally interesting! :)

I'm still questioning why people haven't read this. Maybe because their OC's are not in it?

I mean seriously, this story is outstanding.

7541641 Maybe it's because people haven't read the prequel?

This is a review from Twilight's Reviews.
This is actually a nice story, but I'm afraid not the best. I like how you describe each moment and day of his life after the change in his life. I would actually like to put this story in the Great Reads folder. But as this is an incomplete story, chances are that it could make it to the Best Reads folder. But this is it for now.

Day three?? Why, what happened to day two?

7559422 From the first chapter's author's note:

Most chapters will be short, to emphasize the "moment-by-moment" feel, but some will be longer when need be. Consequently, some arcs will be multi-chaptered; some, single-chaptered. Some days may even be skipped, and this will be intentional.

There's also the issue of me planning this to be a story that takes place over the course of a school year. If the average school year is about 200+ days, well... I don't want to be caught up being a day-to-day recording. The main theme of the story is that the character of Artifex Frost is learning, growing, or facing something different in mere moments, and those lessons are carried over the previous days. You can omit some details, such as entire day records, and still keep the central theme.

*Constructed generic comment saying chapter was good*

Way to kill the Blueblood mauling Javier :ajbemused:

7985165 What? He has the potential not almost not be a dick, just as much as Flash has the potential not to be a boring slate. :raritywink:

Wow! it took me awhile to finish reading this chapter. Your story is very well written and so detailed in words that I couldn't even understand at first. I had to use a translator. :twilightsheepish:

I could learn a lot from your way of writing Jarvy! I'll definitely keep reading this story. Keep up the good work my friend. :raritywink:

8072283 Thanks, Frost! Sorry for the long reading. :twilightsheepish:

Wow, Jarvy that was an impressive chapter. You did a damn good job with my OC Lone. I really laughed at some parts between Artifex and him. Keep up the good work my friend!

Wow Jarvy, after reading this chapter and the previous one, I must say you did a damn good job with putting the pieces together. A new era begins for Artifex, a happy one. With his friend No Clue and everyone else, he met along the way. :eeyup:

Short and strong final chapter. Exactly how an epilogue ends a story in my eyes. The last part with Ruby and Artifex was really beautiful Jarvy. Well done!!! I'll miss your updates on this story. :fluttershysad:

8140694 Thank you, Frost! It's certainly been a fun ride, and while I'm sad to see it go, it was nice while it lasted.

“Hello to you, too, Tool,” he dryly replied. That got a little smile out of her, though it was brief and was quickly replaced with a frown. “Yes, I was invited. Surprise, surprise.”

Took me a while to get the joke.

Artifex was about to join them, when Francis meowed. He peered down at his cat. “What do you mean you like her?!”

The cat meowed again, and he had a somehow-cheeky look on his face. Artifex sighed. “Yeah, yeah, okay, I’m not one to talk…”

NO ONE CAN RESIST THE OC WAIFU QUEEN. Additional Fact: Gaige loves cats.

“Only if you piss him off,” Treble said. “But don’t worry! Deathtrap is as cool as ice. Or as frosty as our two frosty boys over there!” He pointed to Artifex and Lone. They exchanged confused looks.

You had to make that joke.

Sonata shrieked and dropped the tail. She dove to the side and curled up in a ball. “AAGH! PLEASE DON’T SHOOT, MR. DEATHTRAP!”

Believe me, this made me die laughing.

“Settle down, guys,” Applejack advised. “Now, since we’ve each guessed our gifter, Ah guess it’s high-time we get to unwrapping these, ain’t that right?”

At times like these, I'm glad you're background character. Even in fanfiction you still are.

And if one squinted hard enough, at the shadows that they cast, they’d have seen the two merge into one for the first, and far from the last, time.

Merge. I'm tumblr shaming you.

FUN CHAPTER! :rainbowlaugh:

8208063 Fun last chapter, unfortunately. I'm glad you still enjoyed it!

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