Anon-A-Miss has been wreaking havoc all over Canterlot High. Secrets are spread and trust is broken. The Rainbooms go to confront their 'friend' Sunset Shimmer, but are surprised by what they find instead.
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And multiplying like rabbits.
I really like your version.
Seriously, what's with all the anon-a-miss fics recently? There's more being written than usual. Is it anon-a-miss week and everyone is supposed to write one or something?
I really like this twist!
(and thank you for Sunset remind them that if pulled such a move, she would be far more competent on it!)
I can't wait to see the girls's investigations!
This is what I have always said; if anything, the Five would have been her last victims. They would never have suspected her if it was stuff about other students and would have fiercely defended her against accusations.
And thank you for not writing a depressing fic, it was getting old.
I just thought catching the girls off guard with this will help give Sunset a chance. Maybe even suspect the Dazzlings or something.
HAHAHA, I really Like this version. Keep up the good work.
First you had my interest. Now you have my attention.
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I read them a lot, and they are always sad and angsty! It needs more of a twist in! A curveball! Hence, Sunset turns into a pony!
Nice to see an Anon-A-Miss fic that's not depressing, angsty or mopey and actually has the potential for some good comedy to it. Unfortunately, it's way too fast-paced.
To sum up this entire chapter without skipping anything: "Sunset, we know you're Anon-A-Miss!" "I'm not Anon-A-Miss, I'm a pony!"
I'll give it a like, because I like the idea and there's nothing really wrong with the fic so far, but it could really use more work on the pacing. Slow it down, build it up, embrace the comedic potential of having Sunset be a pony. Don't just skip over such a huge thing as Sunset suddenly being a pony like it's nothing when it's such rich ground for comedy.
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OK, that sounds like good advice.
Hey, you can pick it up and try it yourself.
Now things are really interesting!
Applebloom, Sweetie Belle and Scootaloo: you are in trouble!
It was then the Crusaders knew they screwed up.
Adagio Dazzle, "You super hate us? Can you hate us more please? Since you shattered our gems, we've been kinda slowly starving to death from not being able to metabolize any negativity."
hahahahahaha!!
7481187 Could you elaborate on your laughter
7481200 i love how the cmc's plan has derailed so badly.
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OK, so what do you expect to happen next? The CMC meeting in secret? Twilight showing up to help? Or what?
7481252 I doubt Twilight would get involved, that's usually saved for things being dangerous.
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Hm, good point. But Sunset will ask for help to figure this out.
7481481 Well of course. They're pen pals!
That and she's a diminutive equine in a world full of multi-colored humans. That too.
Oooh boy! While Sunset wasn't bame by her close friends, they still tore the school apart. I'm thinking along vacatio in the artic would do them so good hehe.
I take it this is going to be on the shorter side? The CMC found out by chapter three is the fastest I've ever seen.
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I wasn't planning on this to be a dragged out story like the depressing anon-a-miss fics. It's wham-bam here on end.
More.
They are so grounded
OMG, I was just thinking about someone uploading a virus on the Anon-A-Miss site to catch the culpits. You sir have a mind like me. Great chapter.
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I've watched CSI Cyber and got a good idea of how Spyware can work. Basically, hijacks the cameras so that someone can see without the user knowing.
I love this story, I love the Anon-A-Miss twist, I really do, but boy oh boy is it ever too fast! Please, I beg you please, rewrite this and make it a bit longer!
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I may return to do that, but these are just drafts I wanna present. Who knows? Maybe I'll get right on that. But the ideas come and I can't help but write them.
Just enjoy it as it is.
7482857 i do enjoy it!
Will Celestia punish the students who sent personal info as well? They all caused things to be far worst as well.
The girls couldn't doen with out help and the students who send all that info added to the mess as well.
Again i love this story it a great twist to the story and Sunset wasn't destroyed by this event a bit hurt but everyone realized hwo stupid they were.
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I read enough about the depressing Anon-A-Miss fics. I just needed to throw something to knock them off guard.
What consequences will Tech Powers face?
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You mean since he used spyware, which is illegal?
Dun dun dun!
7482972 Yes Minors and cyber crime tl;dr Tech would most likely end up in Juvie
Stop right there, criminal scum!
FINALLY! I was wondering when someone was going to point that out. You sir, just pointed out another thing everyone overlooked. Great chapter and I hope Tech get a light punishment.
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While you're right, CSI is a bad place to learn about tech.
7483360 finally a story that points it out! it's a miracle!
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This is an amazing story also please pm me
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Hi, and thank you. The thing is I just let myself go when writing. I know the chapters are short and the pacing is rushed, but that's the intention. Just trying to get to the end as swiftly as I can.
So an Anon-A-Miss story where the Rainbooms actually come to their senses and help Sunset find the true perps? You get an upvote and a fav, my friend.
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There are too much where Sunset is abandoned, or she runs away. At the very least, after a big shock, they will be able to talk.
Plus, yelling at a talking unicorn pony would just be too weird to make sense even for them
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Yeah. I'm curious about how that happened.
In all seriousness, however, I'm kinda sick of those stories where everybody whines and things get too dark (yeah, I'm aware one of my stories is guilty of that). This is a nice refresher from all of that.
Good work
It was alright, but it feels a bit too light handed IMO. I know the other ones are a lot more dark and depressing but that's because its a dark and serious topic. This is good, but it feels too much like the comic with an altered plot if you know what I mean. A different path was taken, but the outcome didn't differ.
That aside, it is nice to have a non-all sad one for once.
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So not great, not bad, just OK.
Eh, I'll take it.
7484599 More or less. nothing grand, but its not bad. Certainly more than can be said about some of the stuff on the site. Enough to warrant a good job!